aw! i like writing letters like that. did you have fun writing it? Poor kitty, not realizing how much she likes him. except she does, doesn't she becsuse of that bit and the end. anyway, i like it.

Very nice. I loved the ending. :).

T-T That was amazingly well-written! I was driven to tears. *sniff* *sniff* You kept Kitty completely in character too! I can actaully see her saying that... or well writing that to Nathaniel/John Mandrake. Now if only I could just have an ounce of your great talent in my writing...

Awe, I'm gonna go cry. that was so cute!

Excellent! It's wonderful...so angsty and all-in-all perfect! Write more, please.

Oh, Bravo! I especialy love the end, well done!

Oh wow, I love this piece! It just captures Kitty! I can't really think of anything else to say, apart from I really like, which uh...I've already said. Right. Well written, really good. =)

Read your profile: 'Seeks to form a political party that would support any legislation that recommended a mandatory course on fantasy novels in all schools. Picture it...a whole year of learning about Bartimaeus, Artemis Fowl...and the authors, too, I suppose. Any suggestions on what to name this party?' That sounds so cool!

And have you written all the fics in the Bartimaeus section? lol.

(Guess who? Mwhaha I've come to read the entire catagory! I bet you're just falling over in excitement, right?) Hmm. Interesting, Judgey. Kitty seemed in character, especially in the trouser comment. (Hahaha, stupid Nathanial...) I like how she was mad because he didn't even care she saved him. (I wonder if he'll find out in the next one? If so, I hope it's Barty that tells him. Hahahaha that'd be amusing...) I don't know if you were going for a romantical thing or not here, but I just don't see it. I mean, if it happened I wouldn't really care, but I think Kitty saved him just because she's a good person and she didn't want to sink to the magician's level, or something along those lines. But what do I know? Hahaha! I really liked this though, Judgey, very nice indeed (and short! YAY! haha!).

...wow...
that wuz so good!
i'm gonna look up ur other storries now, but just wanted u 2 know that i thought that was seriously great.
-liz
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that was really, really good! you really like kitty, don't you? (i don't blame you. she's the best!) it was interesting and funny. go you!

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*cricket*

*roaring applause*

BRILLIANT! That was so very good...ha ha he's a git...
Wow, so nicely done, nicely done! No critism. Good job.

*squeaks* Oh. My. GOD! That was simply amazing!
~The Random Reviewer or just Dawn

Aww... Kitty is so sweet. Don'tcha just love her?

Anyway, public library computers are annoying, especially when the keyboards are weird. Like this one is. Gr.

So this review is going to be short, since I don't know how much time I have to spend, and since I make a mistake due to the screwed-up-ness of this computer's keyboard. Which, of course, I promptly erase (I do have a reputation as being Obsessive Compulsive to uphold).

Anyway, love the one shot. How about doing another one form Nat's point of view? It would be so cool!!

Okay, I'm really done now.
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Good bye.

That's just really, really nice.

Not completely phenomenal, but good, certainly.

I like one-shots, but only good ones.

You know, that's probably pretty obvious.

Whatever.

Oohh, love it! So nice and ... angsty? Angstful? Whatever. I love it!

Dark Dreams,
Lady of Faerie