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David Shigure 2008-10-04 ch 11,	abuseIt's brilliant! I love it all, very well written and you can convey emotions in the story extremely well... just as a little note, i haven't read the other chapters yet, i will soon, but i just wanted to mention that Tidus does seem a little, overly...um, whats the word? egotistical? yeah, so maybe you can show the readers he's actually a softie, underneath all the layers of machoness & 'jerkiness' ;)
Waiting for your Whistle 2008-07-27 ch 21,	abusebrilliant fanfic! update soon update soon update soon!
AerisTifaYuffie 2008-07-08 ch 21,	abuseI remember when you first wrote this and posted it on here I loved this story. And then when you didn't continue, the years when by or so and you continued and then I read it again. And now I find myself reading the whole story again, being so familiar with it. This is just amazing. Seeing Tidus' personality again, Seymour's creepy ways, GIPPAL TO THE RESCUE, and everything else. I am glad that you did continue and it's very great. I love Auron, reading the earlier chapters I liked the whole thing between Auron and Tidus. "OLD CHAP!" Made me giggle. Though he is just trying to protect Yuna from getting hurt, it's like a twist or so. But yeah I like this a lot. I am hoping to see more Seymour (see more Seymour XD hehe) in future chapters because he's not getting away with it at all I can tell. I love the Tidus/Yuna relationship, it developed well and this is simply amazing. Hope you continue and good job! ^^
Misery's-Toll 2008-07-06 ch 21,	abuseHuh. Well, I read all the way to chapter 21 this evening, and while I have to say its pretty cliche, its cute. ;D I tend to like cliche stuffs. I like Auron. Especially the image of him on a ferris wheel with tiny children. -MT
yunalesca13 2008-07-06 ch 21,	abuseOMG! Auron is an **!! I hate him!!Grr! Why does he have to ruin everything!! loved the chap by the way!! Can't wait for more!!
SavannahX 2008-07-06 ch 21,	abuseHey! About time you updated! I was going crazy! And I got three notices! Horray Elle! =) Of course I love it. It's wonderful! You're such a talented writer and I'm simply in awe of you. Anyway, I got a MySpace and added you so we could talk. I can't get on very often, but when I do it'll be cool. =D I miss you! =( Anyway, I'll get on to reading your other two stories! Love you! ~Savvy
digitalgirl89 2008-07-06 ch 21,	abuseluved the chapter. ahh auron is annoying lol. keep up the work and plz update soon
anon 2008-03-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseGod knows if you're planning to update this anytime soon (it has been a year) but if you do, please please please go back and revise your earlier chapters. There is English in there that just does not make sense. "Contemplated"? I don't believe I've ever heard that word used as a substitute for "promised". And for God's sake - "cogitated"?? A simple "he thought" would have done. Nobody is going to be impressed with you trying to use words that you don't understand how to properly use. It just makes it sound as if you typed it on Word and went and clicked 'synonyms' and found any old impressive-sounding words - which I can tell you they are most definitely not.
kez92p9 2007-12-20 ch 20,	abuseWell its about bloody time lmao! Great fic love it, fab plot! Update soon! MORE pweese! ~Kez~
yunalesca13 2007-11-12 ch 20,	abuseOmg! I am officially going to be constant reader! That was the most amazing fic I've ever read! I love this it keeps me reading no matter how much my mom yells at me to get off the computer I never do I just have to keep on reading! I LOVE IT! Keep on writing and please, please...PLEASE! Post soon I'll die from waiting! I love how this keeps me on the edge almost like if even the smallest thing goes wrong I'm done!Yet every time something does go wrong I'm saved by something amazing which sets me back to teetering on the edge of the cliff again! The only small thing I noticed is you use seen a lot in this and it kinda bugs me! But other than that I'm amazed! I promise I'll keep on reading if you keep posting! Yuna13
Happyfruit4JC 2007-09-27 ch 20,	abuseaw that kissy-scene was soo cute. party was awfully short though? haha. and what is with you woman?! it's been 6 months, are you dead? out of ideas for the next chappie? u could like, make something "dramatic" happen, or finally hook them up...i dono, i just miss this story, gawd! UPDATE!
Shintenshin no Jutsu 2007-08-02 ch 20,	abuseThis is beautiful stuff, you write so incredibly well. I really feel sorry for Yuna =/ Glad that Tidus finally stopped being such a jerk too. Great work, please update soon!
XMiniSakuraX 2007-07-28 ch 20,	abusePlease update! I want to know what happens next.
XxkoeyxX 2007-07-04 ch 20,	abuseWow! I love this story so much and I'm so happy that theyre finally together, I reviewed this chapter like 3 months ago and i just reread this whole story and I still want to read it again its so good! Tidus and Yuna are perfect in this story! Please please please update!
Kami Strife 2007-07-02 ch 20, anon.	abuseWOW! Your story is absolutely amazing! Please keep writing so hooked fans like us don't die of suspense! lol. Anyways, I patiently await your next installment.

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