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| pigtopus 2008-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseGAH. I LOVE TEMARI |
| ichigolynn 2008-09-13 ch 1, | abuseLOL. This was hilarious. Temari's a player . XD |
| quivering quill 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseunique and very good! |
| sophia666 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWow... Temari/all the girls, she's quite the pursuer. Great descriptions and interesting yuri. |
| with love - fred 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseOh man, I liked that a lot. It's a shame that I like ... gave up on reading Naruto everything. XD I love the way you write, though~ |
| TemariFanForever 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseYou...Are...A...GENIUS!! This Was The AWESOME! I Am Amazed! |
| TaintedMoonlight 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI've never read yuri, but I was attracted by the title. I was wondering if you actually knew what id was. (I'm a sucker for psychology terms). It's actually pretty good. I liked it. Really. I can't even pick a favorite line, it's all fab. ~Jenni~ |
| Sin Superbia 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseOh that was hilarious and endearing at the same time. All those boys trying to woo her. I like Gaara's line. '...Gaara is tired of being asked what her favourite color is...' I can imagine Gaara groaning and slapping his forehead when someone asks him that question. It just seems so...Gaara-like...This was the first yuri fic I've read and I'm not disappointed |
| ExplodingChickenOfDoom 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuse^^ I liked it! :3 |
| Osaka-neechan 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis has got to be my favorite light hard YURI, just because it is just *deviously* hilarious by the end. Because even as I read the boys doing things to themselves because of her, I *knew* and I *waited* and it was *totally* worth it. Men made fun and Temari *having* it... with the right sort of women doing the best sort of things... X3 And how you kept all the young women (and Anko XD) in character to what they would *do* when under (Anko?? :P) Temari... it was a brilliantly simple thing. I *adored* this. ^_~ Luffs and kisses! Osaka-neechan |
| Candelabra 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseXD ... ah, that's funny. ^_^ |
| ... 2007-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuse...right...you keep thinking that,temari wears a DRESS!shes a girlygirl,and plz stop making everyone OOC! neji loves tenten(and hasnt met temari),kiba loves hinata,shikamaru MIGHT like her,or maybe ino,sasuke loves nobody,naruto & lee love sakura(bad choice)and GAARAS FAVOURITE COLOUR IS BLOOD RED!GET IT IN YOUR HEAD PPL! |
| ACM a.k.a. Annie May 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed you how structured this fic. |
| Dark Hope Assassin 2007-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI'm ordinarily not into yuri stories but this one was just too good to pass up. You definitely have a knack at grasping the characters of the people in the Narutoverse. You did a splendid job at depicting their reactions and the way they think--or at least that's what I think--and I most definitely loved the way that you had them all swooning over Temari who wasn't the least bit interested. You did wonderful work with that too, describing her character and her way of thinking. I think that this has to be one of the greatest things I have read in a while. And I definitely LOVED the last line. How magnificent! It's too bad that it's already over. You're such a great author! You make an addict out of a read in such a short chapter! I loved this and I loved your style. Keep up the good work! Dark Hope Assassin |
| HannahSakura.Pinoy 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! |