 Ookami Niyati 2009-08-21 . chapter 10I'm really loving this story. You're a good writer and hopefully you update soon. |
 Fury Cutter 2009-08-12 . chapter 10Hey man its been a while, sorry about what's happened to you in the real world but unfortuatly thats life and we all have to deal with it.
Anyway nice chapter, it was interesting that you refenced the CD dramas concidering that most of them are not reguarded as as canon (I defineratly don't think the events mentioned in this chapter are but I might be wrong) but then again only 4 of the movies are concidered canon.
It was interesting to see how Matt was holding up but I was suprised that 2 things weren't brought up.
1 was when BlackOmnimon said "Hold on you should at least show yourself. There is no honor in attacking when your opponent is caught off-guard." I was suprised when NinjaGarurumon didn't say something along the lines of 'If your all about honour then why do you serve a guy like Shinji?'
2 I was suprised Tai's name wasn't brought up into this, Shinji taunting Matt by saying 'What about Tai, your so-called best friend. You broke the cardinal rule, you back stabbed him and stole his girl' or something to that effect.
Oh well I'm sure something like this will come up later.
Again this was a good chapter, I'm interested to see who will get the spotlight next time I'm also hoping we'll see we'll see a little of how Kair and Gatomon are holding up. Anyway hope to see another chapter soon.
Ps I'm interested in what you thought of my MagnaImperialdramon idea, I know its kinda stupid (unless you like the idea) but I'd be interested in what you think of him and feel free to use him if you want. |
 TehBot 2009-08-09 . chapter 10Oh, my... it's an update! So glad you are back! This was a wonderful chapter, as like all the other ones. I can't wait for the next tone. I'm eagerly awaiting to find out who will be the next digidestined to be high lighted! |
 Sightbent 2009-04-25 . chapter 10Interesting turn. |
 Taeniaea 2009-04-07 . chapter 10Great Story!! PLz Update It Soon!! |
 Heero De Fanel 2008-10-14 . chapter 1Yo - it's been a while, hasn't it? :) Sorry to hear about the "retirement", and even sorrier to hear about the death in your family... those are always rough. Anyway, on to happier pastures - this story is going to be one hell of an swan song. 'Tis sad to see Biyomon go, but I guess it had to be done... and I'm sure JetGarudamon is more suited for whatever's coming up next. In any case, I look forward to the next part; till then, take care! |
 ILoveSurprises 2008-09-07 . chapter 9Long time since I've read this story, but it hasn't dissapointed me in the least. It's really one of two or three other Tai and Sora stories well written enough to enjoy. Nice twist with Biyomon sacrificing herself, poor Sora. I like it, hope you update soon. |
 Martiny the one and only still 2008-08-17 . chapter 9Wow...whell that only took like i don't know how long to update ^.^; haven't checked this one in forever ^.^; |
 Fury Cutter 2008-07-11 . chapter 9 Dude that was frickin awesome, lil misty eyed over Biyomon's death but her sacrifice wasn't in vein so I'll find someway to struggle on.
I like the portrayal of Sora in this chapter, the way you explained how the change in her character from Adventure to 02 I found pretty beliveable and how she's rediscovered her true self, I also like how you portrayed Alexis to be her exact opporsit in this.
Couple of questions
1) Are Tai & Sora going to be the only one in this to achive Bio-Fusion, I think it would be kinda cool to see maybe Davis and one of the other 2nd generation achive it, you could have MagnaImperialdramon, descrption: Davis, his skin scaly blue & his hair is longer and spikier with golden streaks in it, wearing Magnamon's armor (minus the mask) as well as a chest plate with the symbol of Miracles on it and weilds a large battle axe in his left hand and has a golden version of Imperialdramon's fusion cannon mounted on his right arm.
2) I'm kinda curious as to how Zeromaru will become UlforceVeedramon & possibly UlforceVeedramon future mode, can he do it own or does he need Tai's help. Maybe he can reach UlforceVeedramon by himself then fuse with Tai to achive future mode, just a suggestion.
Anway loved this chapter, hope you update soon cos I wanna see Tai reunite with Zeromaru, save Kari, kick Neo's ** and get the girl. |
 Sonfaro 2008-06-25 . chapter 9HOLY CRAP!
I'm amped for this. Can't wait for the real thing.
- Sonfaro |
 bubbly.o9 2008-05-22 . chapter 9Wow. That was an awesome sneak peek! But i really wished you posted the chapter already. :) |
 Sightbent 2008-05-20 . chapter 9Can't wait to read the actual chapter. |
 Courage Sun 2008-05-20 . chapter 9(*spins around on chair*) DU~U~U~U~U~U~DE! Your cliff hangers suck!! (*stops spinning*)Zeromaru is awesome! I can't wait to see how he affects the plot and everything.
So... PLZ UPDATE SOON! I'm luvin' this story and can't wait to see more drama between Neo and Taichi! YAY DRAMA! haha, LATERZ!!
~*CS*~ |
 TehBot 2008-05-20 . chapter 9Nice chapter! Zeromaru is awsome. Can't wait to see Sora's reaction. Continue! |
 bubbly.o9 2008-05-11 . chapter 8That was great. update! |