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| kitsune no draco 2006-02-15 ch 3,  | abuseso wat took so long and where were u today sheesh and no doi or duhs please |
| CiceroGuided 2006-02-15 ch 3, | abuseluved it. more plz |
| CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur 2006-02-14 ch 3, | abuseinteresting. . .very interesting. . . . |
| CiceroGuided 2005-10-29 ch 2, | abusehilarious! but please dont b crude (my golden statue of you is tarnishing). and please keep riting! |
| Aeda 2005-07-29 ch 2, | abuseNow this is better. Post again soon. |
| madamwolf 2005-07-25 ch 2, | abuseThis is a good story. Yay Sirius is back! As we all know by now that did not happen in the book. It should have though... |
| CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur 2005-07-24 ch 2, | abuseoh this is wonderful! The formatting was perfect this time around! I cannot wait for more! |
| evil-chick-spike-lvr 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abuseawesome AWESOME awesome update now or Buu will come after you because he knows where you live. lol just kidding i will just bug and bug you till u update so update. |
| Lily390 2005-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis could get interesting. Update soon! Lily |
| CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abuseyou have a very promising beginning which I will most definitely keep an eye on. However, there is one problem. . .the formatting of the story. It isn't the fact that everything is over to the left but the fact that all the lines are double spaced. This wouldn't normally be much of a problem, except that you should start a new paragraph whenever someone new starts talking or the scene changes. That being said. . . .I will most assuredly be reading more as soon as you post it! I am already hooked! |