Delicious!

I love mind tricks like this. It just shows how good ships are overshadowed and how conditioned we are. I love the execution of this fic.

I felt the pain and the loss of control. The slip ups were dexcribed beautifully. It had a very suffocating or domineering tone to it and by the end I could *taste* the helplessness. And as a reader I felt even more helpless because I'd been tricked.

Even without going graphic it was very sensual, like betrayal a bit. It was very raw.

Good title choice.

Watching "Gone Fishin'" could definitely have that effect on a person, not that I'm speaking from experience or anything... I was definitely surprised by this one, and then I reread it and it totally works. Excellent! :)

You are a very cruel person! That was an amazing story, the twist at the end was perfect. I loved it. Though I still think you are quite cruel.

well, you tricked me...and confused me.

I should really start watching these shows again...