 Sunder the Gold 12/25/02 . chapter 2 Very interesting.
To answer the first review: The Animorphs wouldn't stand a chance against the Zoanoids, and I have no desire to see the poor kids slaughtered.
Visser 3, on the other hand, can match right into Chronos headquarters. His host's monstrous morphs wouldn't be enough, because Chronos could just swarm him with a team of high-grade Zoanoids. Or just one Zoalord.
I like Jake/Cassie. On the other hand, I wish to dismiss Jake's apparent sexual irresponsiblity as his dream-state mentality.
A new twist - you appear to have a Zoanoid who CARES about the rest of the planet. Is this true? Will Chronos turn out to be the "good guys" in this? I'd like to see the Animorphs finally catch a good break, and Chronos could definitely find a use for them.
Or did this Zoanoid stop caring sometime between the departure of the Gods and the present time? He showed no concern killing one of his own for what seems to me to be an imagined slight.
Your sentence structure is a bit odd. Sentences tend to run on after a comma where they should end with a period. It complicates trying to understand. |