 Miss DnG 2009-09-25 . chapter 1ah lovely :) |
 My-name-is-foxglove 2008-09-18 . chapter 1:D SO CUTE! I've added this to my C2 and fav list! :D LOVED IT! |
 Lorerom1218 2008-01-27 . chapter 1AW!
lovely |
 takigirl 2006-04-09 . chapter 1love it |
 Aelyn 2005-12-03 . chapter 1 Beautiful! Short, sweet and captivating. Well done, it's a great story. |
 AnnechanB 2005-11-07 . chapter 1OOHH! So Sappy and sweet! I loved it! |
 Batekatt 2005-08-31 . chapter 1Very nice! Not too complicated, and very sweet... I definetively like it! |
 Priestess Kohana 2005-08-20 . chapter 1That was a very kawaii! Good Job, and keep it up!
~Kohana |
 bakagami 2005-08-19 . chapter 1Nice and simple. Great ending line. |
 Sweetest Taboo 2005-08-09 . chapter 1Absolutely fricking adorable! I had a smile on my face throughout the whole piece which turned into this huge grin the minute Ranma said:
"And I know I want you."
This goes straight to my favs list. |
 Dandy Mandy 2005-07-28 . chapter 1Lovely One-shot. Thankyou! It shall go in my favourites |
 Ice Dagger 2005-07-21 . chapter 1How cute! That was pretty funny, the blunt Ranma comment and the huge misunderstanding that Akane had. That really brought the characters to life. I loved it! |
 Iatok 2005-07-20 . chapter 1Very Sweet! Nicely done, I like the idea you came up with for solving the fiancé mess. I like that it is Ranma's choice and that they both seem to have matured. “I want you”, seemed like an easier way for Ranma to say it than "I love you". Fit his character better I think. Only thing I saw grammar/spelling wise was when Akane asks, "what do you mean? feeling curious as to what was going through his fiancé's mind", I think you meant her not his. But no biggy, just letting you know.
Keep writing stories!
Iatok |
 Kopykitty13 2005-07-20 . chapter 1Aww! That was so sweet! |
 PPMKatie 2005-07-20 . chapter 1That was so cute! Finally he tells her! And a kiss!! :) |