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| soccergirlmich 2007-11-25 ch 8,  | abuseWow! Very good! Nice way to end the story! |
| Just some person 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, I can't wait to see where you go with this. Great chapter. ~Rachelle |
| Eternal Paladin 2005-07-29 ch 7, | abuseWow. So, business as usual, eh? Very well done showing Sydney's and Irina's conflicting emotions. Neither of them wants to harm the other, but they are always threatening to shoot one another. Talk about a need for therapy. I also liked Weiss's added comments during the standoff. It was hilarious! |
| Eternal Paladin 2005-07-29 ch 6, | abuseNice! I was so happy to see Sydney get mad at Jack for not telling her that Irina was her mother. That was awesome! It was very interesting that once Sydney was... well, Sydney... again, she knew that Irina had been kind to her when she was too frightened before she got her memory back to notice. Well done. |
| omg 2005-07-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseGreat story! It's nice to read something mysterious and spy-related. I especially liked Chapter 7. Well done! |
| electric pancake 2005-07-29 ch 8, | abuseOh good, it's not a happy ending! I am developing a deep, abiding hatred of fics that just solve all the problems and leave the characters getting married and happy. Overall, it was a very good and well characterised story. I love the new spin on the Sydney/Irina relationship you gave. Hee, well done! |
| electric pancake 2005-07-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseWow, it's Passenger talk a season early! Please don't use season four plot points yet... please? I'll break out the puppy eyes! Good chapter, very good! I feel so sorry for Irina. I miss her. She was so cool. You write her so well, i can hear her voice and everything. Vell done! Hmm, I didn't meant to type 'vell'. Pretend I have an accent. |
| electric pancake 2005-07-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseGood chapter, very good. Must have been SO weird for Francie and Will. Oh, and I've decided on thinking 'Ohh, poor Irina.' I await the next chapter with great interest. |
| Kea 2005-07-26 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow. Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Keep it up. |
| electric pancake 2005-07-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseWhat? WHAT? Oh, that is an EVIL cliffhanger! I'm torn between thinking 'Oh, poor Irina, Sydney might not trust her anymore' and 'Evil Irina, this was all a set-up, Stupid Sydney!' Great chapter! Now scurry off and update, because I need to know what happens as a matter of... national security. Or life and death. Something important, anyhow. |
| Eternal Paladin 2005-07-24 ch 5, | abuseYes! Sydney's back! I liked how you had her fighting back even before she was technically herself and revived by the antidote and I can't wait to see what Irina does now! |
| Eternal Paladin 2005-07-24 ch 4, | abuseWow. This was a really well done chapter. I liked how you had Sydney ask her mother about the scar on her shoulder. No WONDER she was so terrified on the plane! Another part that was done masterfully was the part where Sydney commented that being jailer/prisoner wasn't stopping her and her mother from making a connection. |
| Kea 2005-07-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseOh...more please! :) |
| Danielle G. 2005-07-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseYay. She got her memory back. I wonder what Irian has planned now. Great job. |
| Grouchy 2005-07-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseWhat... ? Please update soon! |