Reviews for The Boys of Summer

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dizzy nic with lamas 2008-07-05 ch 12,	abuseyour fic is really good, but i think that you should change your summary because when people use shortened words and bad grammar and stuff, they tend to be put off and think that the fic will be like that. (crap) im also impressed with the way that you have an oc as a main character in the fic. you gave her her own personality and, while most people usually screw up oc's one way or another, you did a great job. you kept the romance building and really tied the fic together nicely, while keeping the story flowing; not slowing down too much. all in all, great job! ♥,dizzy nic with lamas.
KcrystalLights 2007-04-12 ch 20,	abuseAnd what event is that may I ask?! Oh well I guess I'll find out in the next chapter! I really loved reading this chapter and can't wait to read the next one. But um...is there going to be a fight going on in one of the later chapters? Because that is something that I am really waiting to read. smiles Keep up the good work!
starkle16(not signed in) 2006-08-27 ch 20, anon.	abusei lived in california(palo alto)for 4 years, and in L.A. for 3, but i was 5-7 years old, so i might not remember much. anyways, i just wanted to let u know, if u want to know something about california for ur fanfic, i might be able to help
starkle16(not signed in) 2006-08-27 ch 14, anon.	abuseupdate soon! i cant wait for the next chapter!(i've reread your story over 10 times)
Pan vs Boxer Boy 125 2006-07-11 ch 20,	abuseLol. They are going to California? Lucky! Lol. Yay! You updated! Lol. Hopefully you get back into this story soon. It's really good. Update again soon. Laters!
xmiahimex 2005-11-05 ch 19, anon.	abuseAw...all the couples are happy. This is a nice and sweet story, but I still wonder what does this "Kyo" guy want and does it have anything to do w/ Botan? I mean they said they didn't kno what he wants and what does the thing he wants does? It's great that ur writing the romance in the story, but it'd be awesome if u could also bring in the bad guys also and explain the situation. It is already chapter 19 and I still don see the bad guys planning or anything. I really like the story tho. Oh and sorry bout ur misfortunes.
blu-babe 2005-10-17 ch 19,	abusei luv it. the whole fic, it's so awesome. lol
*Nikki 2005-08-28 ch 18, anon.	abuseOMG OMG OMG! i love your story so much its my faveorit! i think its the BEST yyh fanfic i EVER red and i read ALOT of yyh fanfics! ur so funny rikku i cant stop cracking up when ever i read a new chapter! i love your character 2. i no i said that b4 but i cant help but like her and if shes just like u then i like u 2! ^_^ i think my favorite person in the story is rikku. PLEZZ update soon or i`ll die i`ll just die! im a big fan of hiei botan parings 2 so that just makes ur story the GRATEST! sorry bout the long review but im hyper right now v.v 2 much candy and coke i geuss.
RaieChibiKid 2005-08-24 ch 18, anon.	abuseWhat a cute chapter! YAY! throws heart shaped confetti in air The fireworks and the carnival! How cute! WEEHOO! Make the next chapter soon please!
tsukigana 2005-08-19 ch 18,	abusei got stuck with the laundry this week they whine all day ! i'm doin the best i can! omg we need a miracle i feel like i've known u my whole life! u know we should get a check for our work! hey! wanna be friends
Ami-chan09 2005-08-17 ch 18,	abuse^_^ Good chapter!^_^ I don't know wheather or not your info is correct. I've never been there either!^_^ Umm...YEAH HIEI AND B ARE UP NEXT! we!! update soon please!^_^
Lil-miss-Botan 2005-08-17 ch 18,	abuseme and you should play tennis one day. lol. am glad next chappie will be hiei and botan. yay!
ellamr 2005-08-17 ch 18,	abuseAW I love Yukina and Kuwabara pairings!They are really cute!Oh too bad Hiei wasn't there!heheehe AH you will make a surgery? O_O oh!I hope you do fine...or you could stop wrinting!That will not be good!(hahahaha)Sorry sometimes I get this way... but I really hope you do fine!:D Tchau!
Ishimaru Amon 2005-08-16 ch 18,	abuseThank you so much for rushing this chapter in just for me. I feel so special(blushes profusely)! It's ok that you haven't gotten around to reading my stories yet, I'm sure you will when you get the chance. Excellent job with this chapter by the way, especially the ending scene, I thought it was very romantic and well done, just like I like it!
Lil-miss-Botan 2005-08-16 ch 17,	abuseyea tennis is cool. but i have to admit i suck at it. lol. anyways good chapter. update soon! ^_^

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