That was amazingly cute! Just what Ginny would think after HBP (I'm still mad at Harry for having broken up with her!) Voldie as a cow... you know, he's a male, can't be a COW ;) I loved that your poem rhymed (nowadays so many poems don't rhyme)! Great job!

becca!! hey!! i love ur poems!! its so cool! and original! a bit spoiler true--but i read the book :D really great! * 1/2/*

it's so sweet. first and third paragraphs are the best-written, the third especially.
and the last line is a great, echoing conclusion to ginny's thoughts.
but i STILL like UNMASKED best. heehee.
DUH! DUNDUNDUNDUN DUH!!

i think although you clearly are a good writer, i agree with you that a lot of this is just lines that rhyme, and don't sound that good. it's really good that you recognised this, and you could do something really good with this idea.

:) Good stuff.

Yay! I liked this one too. Good job.

Oh you said that you spent half an hour recovering from shock after you finished HBP? Yeah, I did too ^_^. Except I was sobbing. lol. Good job!

It's a good poem, with the story in it, but the years are mixed up! Ops! fifth year was when Harry started DA, and sixth year he was captain.

ah!1 WHY DO YOU WRITE SO FRIGGIN' WELL?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
become the next Tolkien or Rowling why don't you? i love your work. keep 'em coming! ^_^ but the way i took that Hogwarts house test and i'm in Gryffindor. why did you get Ravenclaw?
*hits head with palm*
oh i forgot! your smart! i;m joking. write more!

Great poem! I think it flowed rather well! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

this is really good! you're excellent at writing peoms!
u made a couple of mistakes like saying fifth year instead of sixth near hte end and stuff. it was really good though!

cute little poem, it's good!

I absolutely