Very good . . . I think I recently read another fic from the same challenge, and it was very interesting to see how different they were with the same first and last lines!

-Hannah

Great story idea, wiccagirl24! I really loved the spin you put on the plant thingy. It was great to see this side of Sara, the no-nonsense side of Sara. I loved the way she spoke to Grissom. I also loved the way you handled Grissom's response to Sara's attitude towards him. It was GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! God bless you and keep up the great work!

Sharon

This was at least the third fic that I read that was a response to the same challenge. This was good and it was cool to see how different writers repsonded.

Jackie

The replanting of the orchid on Grissom's desk was very well done. I could feel Sara's displeasure through out the piece. Excellent work again.

*standing ovation* Amazing... this coming from the girl who is SO anti Grissom/Sara! WO! Great writing, great plot-ness, and OUTSTANDING connection with the characters. Possibly one of the best fics I've ever read...

That was really sweet. Great job.

-Amelia

Awesome!

great version of the plant i tell ya. i loved this...and go sara for dumping the thing on his desk...he deserved it.

sassy

Lovely. I am glad my suggestion worked out for you. Can I have Gary the three nights he is off?