   Ayakashi 7/22/05 . chapter 1Nice one-shot! It was really good. Keep up good work! |
| yuffiegal 7/17/05 . chapter 1 Pretty good start!:) |
| xXEnvyXx 7/17/05 . chapter 1 Its great, dont worry, I didn't blink.
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Great songfic! |
| youtastedsonice 7/17/05 . chapter 1 wow that was intense. good one shot i liked it haha |
| Aseret Kitsune 7/17/05 . chapter 1 this is really good. the song goes really well with the fic. great job! |
| yup 7/17/05 . chapter 1 nice story keep the good job |
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