I like you have methuselah as a dibbion. this will be intresting.

On me faves this story be... more you shall write

Hey this is pretty good!

Nope, can't imagine Methuselah as a Dibbun. He couldn't have been at all naughty, I'm sure. Oh, well. Great story!

I put u on my favourites list and on author alert, and seeing as this is me thats a good sign! keep it up, and (pleez review mine, diggers keep)don't stop writing.

Pikkle is completely hollow. His stomach's so big he barely has room for his other vital organs. I like the way you're filling in the time slot between Salamandastron and Redwall using the former's main characters. Keep at it!

Care: Great so far! Can't wait for the next part!

O.O! Y-You...the accent...It's ALIVE! YES! BLESS YOU! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR NOT SLAUGHTERING THE PRECIOUS BRITISH ACCENT! ;; Er-ahem-right, you're story line has been done well enough, you stay in character superbly, and...YOU DID THE ACCENT PERFECTLY! Kirby will now give his dance of approval:

Aye, I'l be putting up a chapter pretty soon. Just finishing up some character descriptions and the like. What will happen next? Find out next week, same Redwall time! Same Redwall channel!

Is there anymore? I wanna see what's going to happen next!

A very, very good beginning. I was taken in by the otter, just as the little ones were. There's excellent tension in it, too - please continue!

That's a good start, keep going!

Tha's a good start. Keep on going.