Wow! Good story! Will you ever continue? ^_^

oh, this should be updated! it's really exciting!

That was really weird.
Please update soon becuase I want to see what happens.
And all of this seems... so fimiler.
Could that guy that wanted to kill Donnie... be my bad side?
No! It's taking me over again!
Bwah, ha, ha, ha, ha!

Now how did I miss this one? Odd...I seem to be missing a lot of cool stories these days!

Anyway, if that was just the prologue, the story looks like it's gonna be awesome!

Poor Donnie. Waking up to someone about to behead you is NOT the best thing to wake up to.

Welcome back my friend. I had a feeling your start another story rather than update others. I think its a psychological ploy to keep readers wanting more ;) and its working. This story is another gem . So keep writing , and be happy.

Curiouser and curiouser. This is definately a perplexing situation. What could be the cause of this distraught (that's probably not used in the proper context, but it sounds good, at least to me).

Tune in next time, same Turtle time same Turtle channel.

Jarred Fouche
misterfooch

Hm... you have my attention. Please continue!

In the mean time... (waits patiently at computer screen) I'll still be waiting for an update on Recovery!

I LOVE Donnie Leo moments... Keep it up... write whenever you can I will totally read it...

I'm thinking that his timing in waking up was pretty darned good. A moment later and there would have been no waking up.

Aw, poor sleepy Donnie. Sounds like Leo got there just in time too.

AAH! What happened to him?! Please update soon! This has all the markings of another Gemdrive masterpiece!

Cheers,
~pacphys~

What the...holy...Donny can't...Oh boy, you've got me hooked now! The suspense! Oh! We'll soon find out why he's been gone three weeks, I hope..unless you'd like to be gone for three weeks...(holds up a club with an evil grin)

LN

really good

Can't way to read what append to Donnie.

great work continu

Hey, Gem, long time no read! LOL Great that you're back and that whatever had to be 'taken care' of has left you with lots of time to write - and read - and review.

Anyway, clearly this is a great beginning to an intensely curious mystery. You're doing a great job with opening this story up, Donnie 'coming to' in the alley, with a man just seconds away from severing our purple-masked hero's head, and then Don recovering just in time to prevent that from happening. Great job there.

You did shift from past tense to present tense here and there and might I encourage you to stick with one or the other, but past tense does reads a bit better.

Anyway, I can sense Don's confusion as far as why he was in the alley and not where he intended to be. Add to that, the strange man with the ax and you have a fascintating story! (grins) Poor Leo; all worried and then to tell Don that he's been gone for three weeks? Wow, just really packs a whollop!

Okay, as I read I noticed more present tense sentences, as if you were writing this as it happened. First person accounts can be tricky like that, so it's entirely up to you how you want this to read. Where you have both past and present tense wording in the same paragraphs and sometimes in the same sentences, it can get rather confusing.

However, that does not in any way interfere with the story content and what it's about. So, with that said, you must continue writing and updating and giving us more points to ponder regarding Don's situation.

Definitely looking for more! Please? With whip cream and a cherrie on top?

Okay, whatever it will take, just make sure you update this and sooner rather than later!

Be blessed.

Well, when I first saw that you'd started another fic, I thought: "Hey, when I review I'll ask her where the epilogue of Recovery is." But then, you answered that question in the author's notes. Then I thought of telling you that you're crazy for starting another fanfic when you've got a ton of others to finish. But again, after reading the AN, I guess you already know that. ^_^
Okay, so after telling you that much, I was going to ask if you really planned on adding more chapters to THIS story. But once again, your psychic AN answered all my questions.

And so now I have no more questions for you.

Well, I hope you really DO update THIS fic, 'cause I'm dying to know what in the world happened to Donnie. Three weeks and not a clue...

Update!
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Hi! :)

I wonder what happen to Donatello?

It would be scarey to lose your memory. Not knowing who you are or your love ones. Poor Donnie!

Well, great chapter a bit of a mystery but terrific!! : )

I was a bit curious about the next chapter to your other fic, "Will the Real Leonardo Please stand Up?" Will you be updating this fic?
I hate writers block! It's like your brain can't think it's empty. I had this too a few times, I'm not perfect on my stories I wrote I have a problem with comas so I'm bit shy to write a story because of my mistakes.

Take Care,
Leonardo15

Yes, great fanfic! You've certainly got my attention. I really wonder what has happened. Write more soon, please. ;) V.