I'm just going through your stories, and I pretty much love all of them. This scene in particular from the movie was one of my favorites. When I first watched the movie, thought Elizabeth would end up liking Jack, but alas..

Really, Commodore Norrington ought to be grateful to him. He’d bet that stiff and proper gentleman had never had his arms around his girl before. And now Jack had even saved him most of the trouble of undressing her.

I had quite a giggle at those lines.

Well done all the way through! You do a great job of taking the film and running with it in a way that comes off as original. And though this may be an old story, it deserves more reviews. :)

Thanks for writing!

Great story! I loved the way it was written - you made it really interesting even to someone who knows the film by heart.

COOL! 'nuff said

That's the best PotC novelization I've encountered. You should be doing this professionally.

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This was absolutely fantastic!

I adore the wording! I don't believe you missed a thing. The POVs were dead-on to what I interprit from the movie (of course, I am a Jack/Liz fan.)

The detail was fantastic, and Norrington's envy perfect. This has to be one of my favorite Pirate's fics! I do hope you have more. *goes and checks out your profile*

Keep up the great work,

Song

I do love novelizations. And this one was especially good. Thank you!

oh god, i love jack.

which is pathetic because he's fictional. (cries)

great stuff. good inclusion of thoughts/perspectives/whatever-you-wanna-call-it

Loved it, loved it, loved it. Excellent characterisation, imagery and writing quality.

Bravo...that was brilliantly done, just beautiful...I'm off to read the sequel now...

hah! saved him the trouble of undressing her! brilliance! i love this insightful piece!

This is so good. It deserves way more than 14 reviews! you write so descriptively - it's amazing!

jogreenleaf

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one word: wow.

All I can really say is that you are an incredible writer with a multitude of talent and creative and imaginative ideas is that wonderful imagination your works have given me a peek into. Now, to be quite honest, there really are no words to express my enjoyment in reading actually decent fics-though that doesn't mean there aren't other stories out there what are decent-such as those you have written. Again, you are an amazing writer, and your talent is matched by few.

MydragnameisToddLol

Wow, great imagery, it's enough to give you chills, hat's off!