 Your-Bones-Akin 2009-11-30 . chapter 7You definitely have some original ideas. I especially liked the part where that dead-weight character got photosynthesis. I don't think I'd ever expect that sort of thing, which is exactly what fiction about magic is supposed to be. It was pretty funny, too. Again, looking for the rest of this. |
 Your-Bones-Akin 2009-11-30 . chapter 1This fiction seemed rather cheesy at the beginning, but it's actually cool in that cheesy way (but still cool). Anyways, look forward to the rest of it. |
 thenewblack 2009-11-29 . chapter 34 I love Namach and the Ateres'. |
 thenewblack 2009-11-29 . chapter 13 I really like this story. I'm really just scanning through this as this is the second time I'm reading this part-- I read to probably not quite half of the sequel and then stopped first time through. So, I'm reading it againg so I can keep things straight since I also read another similar story after I read this. |
 TheRoaringGriffin 2009-11-29 . chapter 21Awesome chapter...
Love your story!
Awesome writing techniques and grammar! (from what i know)
Keep writing more stories! |
 kyoshi711 2009-11-24 . chapter 8I think my giving Harry a stupid name like that and reading this story it almost feels like a different character all together. So far this story is boring I'm hoping it will pick up. |
 kyoshi711 2009-11-24 . chapter 2If Harry were a muggle he would be a real drug addict. Also stories where they have a girl friend shows what he is feeling and how he is dealing with situations. Makes the story more whole. |
 Lord Lugos 2009-11-23 . chapter 35Wow, that was one hell of a ride! Took me a while, but I finally read it all. Now I don't know if I should goto sleep, or start on the next fic.
One thing that has surprised me, is that you haven't mentioned the basilisk venom and phoenix tears running through Harry's veins. I know quite a few fics make use of this, one in fact had those two ingredients being deadly to vampires, killing them if they decided Harry was a snack.
Oh well. Perhaps I'll just take a peak at the next fic before bed. ;) |
 Lord Lugos 2009-11-21 . chapter 19Fine, I'll finally review before I take a bathroom break. At first, I thought it was a HP goes back in time to his younger self, based on the title. When it wasn't, I was annoyed, and then, my analness was annoyed witht the minor spelling and grammatical errors that made reading a little difficult.
I almost quit. The thing is, though, is that this story is damn brilliant! Totally deserving of the obscene amount of reviews it has. A three story arc though, it's going to take a while for me to read it all. I truly can't wait to see what happens next, though the demon horde that comes later really has me a bit nervous.
Okay, now back to the story. :) |
 CarolWim 2009-11-19 . chapter 1What can I say. It's a masterpiece. It kept me up and not sleeping for two nights! No work done, wife upset, children happy, hardly took a shower. |
 Percival 2009-11-15 . chapter 26 'Good' Wizards could show justice and imprison Ron; perhaps some community service where Ron is forced to feed vampires. |
 Holmes 2009-11-15 . chapter 21 You need fingerprints on file, to compare to the fingerprints you collect.
DNA might work; if you knew an old hairbrush belonged to regulus and then you compared that to a more recent sample. |
 maddiebooks 2009-11-14 . chapter 1Wow.
~maddiebooks |
 SnarryandDrarryLuver101 2009-11-13 . chapter 8Hello, I have just recently been introduced to your ... stories and I must say that so far your story seems very nice. The only reason that I am reviewing at all, since I usually don't after an auther is finished with it, is because I think that my comments might be appreciated or even taken into consideration when your involved with another. So here goes. I like your plotline but, I think that it was a little rushed and that it might be a good idea to go back and edit a little. I don't like the way the teachers act, you've made out like it's a top notch, high priority school of which many die in, and I personally think that your teachers are a little to nice and are a little to involved with their students. Plus I don't think that after Harry kept so many secrets at hogwarts that he would tell all of his secrets to whomever was in the class. I don't think Harry should have that many friends and I think that there should be a little more prejudice involved. I know that all are welcome by the headmistress but, children are mean to one another whether or not they're mature. Plus the trip through the woods was completely pointless. If they were excepted into the school than they had already proved their worth and I think you're giving Harry to many bones to chew on. There's no reason what so ever he even needs to get the cap yet. There should be a little more trial and a lot less triumph. May your future stories be more realistic and very prosperous.
Your fellow reader,
Rhiaonna Lore |
 darkED2 2009-11-09 . chapter 35just legendary
superb
brilliant
havant slept been readding this non stop |