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| Reviews for past and present |
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   Noc007 7/4/06 . chapter 4This was becoming interesting, pity it hasn't been updated tho :( |
| Catgirl the Crazy 10/10/05 . chapter 1 This is Catgirl again. In my previous review, I put in the URL for a spellcheck website, it was automatically deleted from my review, I don't know why. I had to review anonymously because it doesn't let you review twice for one story. Enough of my rambling, here's the URL again (just replace DOT with with a period): wDOTspellcheckDOTnet |
| Catgirl the Crazy 10/10/05 . chapter 4 This is a wonderful story, but I have some grammatical suggestions for how you write it. 1) Every time someone different starts speaking, start a new paragraph. This make it easier to read. 2) Indent each time you start a new paragraph. 3) Spell check! I see millions of spelling errors in fanfiction, and it really annoys me that people don't seem to care enough to at least use a spell check program (of which there are plenty, I can assure you. Many word processing programs come with one built in, and even if the one you use doesn't have one, you can use I'm not saying your story is downright horrible. It just needs some editing. Please update soon! |
| Mandish Muffin 9/15/05 . chapter 1 Coolness Did you know that all calico and tortishell cats are girls?Guys are worth millions! |
| Dreamcloud 9/3/05 . chapter 4 Who is the catt that Firestar knew that was in Thunderclan but was captured by two-legs? i want to know! write another chapter and i will be happy! happy happy happy happy happy happy happy happy happy! |
| Dreamcloud 9/3/05 . chapter 3 Told ya i wouldd review haha! well awesome story write more! i like bluekit he sounds so cute! write more! |
| Dewpelt 8/27/05 . chapter 4 Great story! Keep it comin'! |
| Kaliza 8/23/05 . chapter 4 Heya! I love the last Ch... Especially now that I've finally read the first book in the series it makes more sense :P So write more! |
| Reigen 8/18/05 . chapter 1 There is a Whitepaw in the New Prophecy series, she's the daughter of Cloudtail and Brightheart. I know this story was written before the books came out, but I just thought you should know. |
| Ayame-Skibob 8/16/05 . chapter 1 o.o That was incredibly short... |
| Dreamcloud 8/16/05 . chapter 3 Great story! aw your getting a kitten? Congratulations! I have to cats.. but there not kittens anymore.. well write another chapter and I will definetly review on it to! |
| Dreamcloud 8/13/05 . chapter 2 Aw! poor Mom.. and poor Glory, Stripes, and Salem. Darkpelt, Greypelt, and Ambereyes go into the forest? Are Windclan, Riverclan, Shadowclan and Thunderclan there? Which clan do they come to? I love your story it is so suspense! please write much more! Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! |
| Purple Eyed Cat 8/1/05 . chapter 2 I liked it so far. Please update more, and feel free to check out my new story, Warriors: Starlight. Update soon! I would love to read more |
| Littleclaw 7/27/05 . chapter 1 THIS IS SO GREAT please write more I want to know what happens next. You began a GREAT prophecy thingy! |
| Ralka 7/20/05 . chapter 1 Oh nice beginning! Wanna read more! |
