Are you ever going to finish this story

OMG intense lol when's the next one?

I love this story plz update and keep u[ the good writting

So...it's been a year since you updated...again...feel like starting a trend? (Incidentally, loved Kabuto/Orochimaru dialogue in their...lair)

I absolutely LOVE Johanna Lindsay's "Angel". It's one of my most favorite books, ever! Your story would absolutely make her proud.

col story.

Eeh. It's already near the ending...and you stop...

Please update soon!:D

luv it!

love it finish the story!

Great story! And Naruto is like a breath of air in such a tense situation

//"Haha,” Naruto laughed jovially, “we’re wingin’ it!”//

Love his joy at such a situation... heheh...

And Sasuke cannot keep his composure at Orochimaru's pedo-like remark. I couldn't stop giggling for the rest of the chapter becuse of that.

Can't wait to see how this all ends!

OMG! You are taking forever to update!! I read the story angel because it was similair to your story and I loved it!! I can see the differences between the two stories though. I like yopurs I just wish you would hurry up and update!! Not to sound pushy, but it's a really good story!

O. That was really good! I like this story a lot! its pretty well writen! Please update as soon as you can and thanks for rockin' the house!

i love where the story is going i hope u update really soon i love it yet why is it fictions rated m when there is nothin wrong abt it?

please write more soon i love your story :)i cant wait to see what happens next

Aww, It's ok. I'm sorry your idea didn't turn out like you wanted it too. Because you'd thunk you'd be copying a canon version of the manga.
But.. IT'S OK. Ha. I don't even think 'THUNK' is a word.


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