Well written

Wonderfully written... dark... believable... faintest underlying hope... well written romantic descriptions, that fully convey the meaning, without being too graphic... great possibilities for a full storyline... Thanks!

DAMN... that was dark... and AWESOME!

You write evil Snape really well!

This one was good. Very dark. A bittersweet dance of prose across the page.

Well, that was horrible. I read it because you usually write really good stories, but this one was quite terrible. I mean, it was well written just terrible in what happened.

I really liked the story... Hopefully Snape won't turn out to be so mean! But it was cool to see his gentle side...

Update soon.

Wonderful job. For your first attempt at something dark, you did an amazing job.

I love how you show us a bit of the thoughts he's having about Hermione and his feelings about how dangerous it could be.

awesome, awesome.

i realy like it. it's sort of like the first view of next generation hg/ss fanfics wich are now harder to write after HBP.

Woah...

That one was seriously...I don't know. I am having a hard time right now after reading HBP. I used to love SSHG stories, but I'm so disgusted with Snape right now, I don't know what to do. This story was exactly what I needed, strangely enough.

I really didn't believe it when I first read the end on HBP. I thought I was reading fanfict at first. I couldn't believe it! Now that it has settled in my mind, I think I might have a hard time going back to my favorite ship. I was ready to throw myself from the deck!

Aw...that's not cool...but I liked it!

wow that's really good. i refuse to believe snape is evil though. post again soon!

i don't like the idea of snape really betraying them, but this is a good story and i am glad people are still writing about snape.i don't think i will be able to read stories where the writer really hates him, but stories like this i am kind of ok with because i get the feeling that your are exporing the possibilities without really putting in your opinion of severus whether it is good or bad, and that makes me feel more comfortable with stories like this.

i myself think there might be more to HBP then what there seems and i am hoping severus is not how he looks. but i do get the feeling even if he isn't really evil i am not going to like how JK ends the books in regards to snape because i don't think she likes him at all.

and i think everyone must remember that with fanfiction you can tell YOUR story of the characters, JK is telling hers and who the character are to her and anyone who writes fanfics can do the same, you can use any of the books for a base, write anything you find plausable(sp?) and readers find believeable while they read it.

so i hope you keep writing stories and don't think to badly of snape

bye bye

Terrible! I still can't believe that he did it...

good story...

hg/ss fiction is going to be so much harder/darker now