 Courtnerrr 2006-05-22 . chapter 4Have you abandoned this story? Because I really really love it, and I really really wish you'd continue it. *pouts* Please?
♥Courtner |
 lovebombing 2005-07-24 . chapter 3yes, i must admit, i loves it.
switched towels. nice mental picture. you got spunk, kid. fantastic work. |
 misslmosley 2005-07-24 . chapter 3An Apparating "accident."
Interesting excuse, dear.
Currently, I'm liking Draco and the House of Malfoy bunch much more than the aurors... |
 lovebombing 2005-07-18 . chapter 1formating is fine. it's a style. paragraphs are divided to different parts of the fic. Might want to check out the characters names in fifth paragraph from the bottom. confusing when characters names are real words. (not/nott)
lovely story, by the way. written very well. style, interesting. word usage is original, i believe. ooc: limited.
didn't like the "my name is blaise" part. didn't seem subtle enough. didn't tie in with the rest of the story. could have given that info out better. but hey, it's your story.
more, please. |
 misslmosley 2005-07-17 . chapter 1Please PLEASE fix the formatting.
I really REALLY want to read this, but I can't while the formatting is the way it is. The plot sounds wonderful, but you need to fix the formatting. |
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