This is excellent. I love the way you've written Narcissa - very true to her following the revelations in Spinner's End. Great stuff. *beams*

I loved it. We finally get to see Narcissa as a human being. We no longer need to speculate.

Narcissa has blue eyes.

this is quite good!

Oh, wonderfully written. I pity the poor woman too, of course it may be because of the evil connection we share. guess what. Its 10:30 and Im on chapter 14. the books gettin good. keep up the good work on your fics please darling, and i will continue reading.

with all my love-

Ishbu girl- lol

Hm...I dunno if Narcissa was quite in character in the last part...but besides that, it was good and tied in nicely with the real goings-on.