Absolutely first class stuff!
Amazing!

Just wow!

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This was...interesting to say the least. The writing was awesome, the plot just wasn't one of my favs. :shrug: Like I said, great writing, just a not so great plot.

no bad cliffhaner this time?!?! i love the cliffhangers!!

this is really good, but i just cant stand the way the grammar is pread out like were all three years old and dont get it... still, really great plot and all! nice work

What a great chapter!! I was laughing so hard I cried, especially when she messed all over him and he kicked her across the room. I know that should be funny, but what can I say she deserved what was coming to her. Great story so far; I have enjoyed ever chapter! :D

I think that the premise is good here and I liked the idea of having Sirius walk her down the aisle while he was in love with her.

However, there are quite a few problems with this story, mainly with characterization. Hermione is way too accepting of Ron's bad behavior. And Ron is just plain horrible--this story would be much better if he was more of a complex character instead of having no good qualities at all.

Overall, the situation is a bit unrealistic. I can't imagine that Ron and Hermione would only kiss once before he decided to propose to her. And I can't believe the two of them have never discussed physical intimacy before.

I also can't imagine that Sirius would give her no clue about his feelings.

Other than these three, I do like the secondary characters (Remus, Tonks, Ginny, Harry etc). And I applaud you for choosing the HG/SB ship, even though I don't agree with your interpretation of these characters.

Okay, I realize this story is very old but I just needed to say this. I have been recommended this fic several times and while I have been enjoying it somewhat, I am so fkcuking ** off at how OOC Hermione is. It's **cking bullshhitt! She would never be as **kckcing weak as you write her-- or as much of a sap.

Oh my goodness! I love it! I'm still trying to recover from this emotional roller coaster. This is one hell of a fanfiction, and I don't usually read Hermione/Sirius fics. So you know, I pretty much bawled my eyes out and smeared my mascara down to my lips!(P.S. I rarely ever get this emotional, let alone cry.)

love the story

GREAT STORY

I just wanted to say how much I love this story. Seriously, I've re-read it so many times and it always makes me feel all bubblely and girly inside. LOL

LMAO HAHAH I almost wished that she would have found out it was Sirius lol, but then again I guess it wouldn't be as funny lol. Haha. Love the ending.

Wait how does she know that or was it because he was naked? I'm a bit confused lol

That was probably the most beautiful story that I've read yet. It really touched me. Thank you...please write another SB/HG fic soon!

aww what a beautiful story ^_^