YOU WHAT! u cant do that! ur fanfics to good!! jk, just try to update quick when u start again cause i really liked ur fanfic! i REALLY VERY liked it! (really VERY? what the... what kinda statement is that!

~amaya

This is a really good story! But it IS going kind of fast. Slow it down a bit...

U.U And remember, verb tenses and grammar makes everythig easier for the readers! Just a bit of constructive critiscm

>Misao-chan

great chapter as usual oh no kaoru's memories are erased god i wonder how kenshin will react
update soon
antica ^_^

i hete his father, he is so mean

Bu-bu-bu...2...m-mo-months?

We waited this long for an update and now we have to wait TWO MORE MONTHS for the next? Fuwg. DD:

Anyways...yeah. xD I really liked this chapter but there was a lot of dialog (which is okay, but:...) and hardly any description. Work on that because it can get just a little confusing sometimes when multiple people are talking.

Other than that I really liked it. But...what exactly happened? All I can make of it is...she's going bak home, her parents are divorced, her dad wants to keep her from her mother and his x-wife so he fakes her death...and actually injures her, then she goes into a coma and remembers nothing? o_o I'm not sure if that's all right...but anyways, this was pretty enjoyable to read. When I got the review in my email I was like, "HOLY SNIZZLE, FINALLY! =D!!" -biggrin-

Also, I must commend you, you did not have a beta correct this chapter before it was put up and yet you seem to be doing a lot better with your grammar and such. Kudos to that, you're making excellent progress and this story is quite enjoyable to read.

Thanks for updating this Steph! :D

-rides off into the sunset-

continuing until 2 months... ::faints:: 'nyway... hm go kenshin...^^ and put more aoshi in the story...xD HEEHEE...XD kekeke anyway, i'll go now and stop trashing your review page...XD

-loves roy mustang-

duckii

p.s. im not even going to bother to say update soon...xD

Oops...I hadnt realized I reviwed that last chapter a bit late...GOMEN NASAI!!...*bows*...oh no...new sister??...hmm I have a feeling that it is...*coughs*..um ...^_^...anyways update soon!!

*hugs u until u turn blue*...^_^.i lovies it!...anyways...Frosty Memories??...ermm...I must have to confess...that website is gone!!...*cries*...oh well...i liked this please oh please update!..

-Kioku

gr... kenshin is so THICK hmm... good grades?...=P ahaha... i just finished my yearlie exams and i swear i got like really bad... la la la...^_^- aw... too bad kenshin didnt run after her and like yell out some sentimental words blah blah... and then yeah... anyway... UPDATE... heehehe... and please update changing for you... ^^ whee...

!PiNoY!

hahaha... misao is so evil...XP are you going to put any indication of the other pairings...? anyway, this was another interesting chapter... WHEEHEHEHE... you shouda made the title two pasts, one future... i think it would sorta relate to the fic a bit more... but hey its your decision... la di da im bored...keep on writing...=P

yo... flashback of kenshin and tomoe was pretty short and i sorta dont see why kenshin fall for her but anyway... WAH WHY DONT KENSHIN HURRY UP AND OPEN UP... even worse than aoshi...T_T... ^_^- oh yeah... i dont knwo if you put their age in this fic and if you did... i didnt realise, but how old are they?

hallo... whee kenshin is finally opening up...! i write useless reviews...^^" anyway, interesting scene... with kaoru always hugging kenshin subconsciously... and then she slap him blah blah blah... and how come misao is like really close to kenshin?

hehehe... that was sad... the flashback between kaoru and kenshin... T_T oh well... it just leave kenshin free for kaoru..=P hm anyway... keep on writing...=D

gahh... the teacher put them in teh same tent with ONE sleeping bag...-_^ ... ehehe...=P hehe... do you put your friends in your fics? i do on fictionpress... and she get so angry at me sometimes coz i make her seem so different...=P anyway... there was a bit in here which i didnt really understand but oh well... maybe you should put a new line for each person who speaks... czo sometimes its a bit difficult to tell who is speaking or not... gahh... dont listen to me...

YO TENSHI... ITS ME THE CRAZY CYDUCK... okay never mind me... ooh another one of your fics...=P im not gonna bother going on about all of the grammar crap... coz bleah... too much energy wasted...^^ anyway... thsi fic sounds so... you know... like PREDICtABLE... Kenshin meets KAoru... blah blah... they get paired up for something at school and then they get together... and then they live happily ever after...^^ but yeah... oh well i will keep on reading and see what happens...=P OH yeah... short chappie...T_T but still good... KEEP ON WRITING