This is very well-written and interesting.

One thing though: Kohaku's only like a year older than Rin, but it makes for a good story!

Keep it up!

I liked it very much. It was very sweet!

Yuki

I loved it and thought the ending was funny.

That was fantastic and well written. I like the fact that you made it from Kohaku's perspective. I hadn't really considered them together but the way you've written it it works.

- Langus

I enjoyed this.

Very nice - it flows with lots of realism.

Go you!

A Rin/Kohaku fic that has a great beginning. Can't wait until you update this...

And I found this at a site that said it is Sesshoumaru/Kagura too? XD I lurve that couple!

Loved it! wright more ... pleas! 0,0

I very seldomly like a Kohaku/Rin pairing, mostly because writers tend to do it with a 'it's supposed to happen' easiness that doesn't exist in canon. But this, I liked. It *made sense* and didn't step over any characterisations, Sesshoumaru's included (and that is very hard to pull off)

Congrats and thanks for the good read!

Aww. That was a sweet little story. I loved it.It was one of those stories that made me sit and aww, and day dream, because it was adorable.

great story. is it a one-shot? i was just wondering because it looks like a good place to add more chapters (or not).

still, if it is a one-shot, i gotta say, it's really awesome. kohaku as a wandering tortured soul has suprising depth. chasing after someone unattainable makes him all the more interesting. a little unrequited, but that's what makes it complicated story.

very cool.

That was just so cute!

"That kind of arrogance took balls he couldn’t begin to imagine."

Lol! Anywho, I added it to my fanfiction archive...well, I'm about to. I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner...

this story was a good

so cute... plz update this story seems like it'll be good. Actually it's awesome already

*sigh* Boggy, you are wonderful. The words, the phrases, the characterization, and the situation-all spot on. It scares me how good you are at this. I suppose I can allow myself to blame my inferiority and general awe with your work on pure inexperience. Then again, there are a select few other authors who also never. Cease. To Amaze.

The only thing is, for KOhaku being five years her senior, it wouldn't be a big problem, especially in the feudal era. The Japanese women were marrying men who were sometimes thirty or fourty years older than them if it enhances their family's status. I think a better arguement for this section would be Kohaku's lack of rank. As I understand, he's a wandering demon slayer, and Rin is the 'child' of a powerful demon lord. So, rank, not age, would be Kohaku's argument against himself.

Just thought I'd throw that out there-

Kalliel