Hi

NO Miss Parker betrayed Jarod say it isn't so. Please wirte more chapters.

Hi 24,

Can't believe that MP would do that to Jarod?, specially now that she knows who her real father is. Please continue, intrigued to see where you're take this story.

Mercy

That's great! I'm happy that someone decide to write a story about Parker betraying Jarod. I really hope that you'll continue it soon!

P. me if I made some mistakes, but I talk French, so...(I come from Quebec, Canada).

Are you TRYING to make us hate Parker for taking Jarod in? Cause what your writing, can make it go that way!

You had better redeam her, or let Jarod escape and let him do a bit of "Parker-Payback"!

Great story, post more soon.

Is there more? Are you going somewhere other than what we think, because it's out of Jarod's and MP's character. If he wanted to talk to her, he would just show up at her house-he always did. Through the course of the show, MP proved to be trustworthy when it came to Jarod; she never betrayed him. Even when he kidnapped her father, she promised to show up alone and she would have if not for the threat on his life. Remember, she even apologized to him for bringing people with her. Just a few things to think about.

enjoyed reading hope your not going to stop at just this hope to read more think of all the possibilities