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Zahariu Uzumaki
2007-02-22 . chapter 4
Aw...Poor Yoh. Why is he dead? I MUST KNOW!! TELL ME!!
Thanks.
LostBionicChild
2006-11-13 . chapter 4
Cool~ poor Yoh... who's gonna end up with who? OwO Will be waiting!
HxH-holic
2006-11-06 . chapter 4
I like your story and I don't think that Anna is a bit ooc. Please update soon.
Blowing Raspberries
2006-09-29 . chapter 3
PLEASE UPATE SOON! THIS IS SO AWESOME! ^_^ PLEASE *GIVES YOU A COOKIE AND ADDS TO ALERT AND FAVS* :3 PLEASE! I NEED TO READ MORE!! XD
grdiang3l
2006-07-18 . chapter 4
cute
Sephiria Chronos
2006-07-14 . chapter 4
Kawaii! Plz update soon!

Love,
Kagome Anna, forever InuYasha's.
VampireApple
2006-07-14 . chapter 4
Bick. I don't like HHA, annoying pairing. Good chapie though. I'll be waiting for the next one.
Alleluia Rhapsody
2006-07-13 . chapter 4
Ha! I love it! Cookies for you!
jade destiny
2006-01-15 . chapter 3
Er...I hope you update the next chapter a bit faster than this one XD. Anyway, Anna was a little OOC. I like her because she's rude, cold and doesn't hesitate to hit people. So, I hope that side of her pops up soon ^^. And I'm glad that this will be Yoh x Anna. I love that couple XD. I don't know about Horo Horo and Anna seeing as I see their relationship as a funny one...where Anna can punch the heck out of him and make him clean her house XD. But that's just me...hehe. And I also hope you have Tamoa falling for Yoh. That way, it'll be more interesting and complicated for Yoh and Anna...and it'll be like the show too, where Tamoa really loves Yoh.
notnow
2006-01-07 . chapter 3
Really glad you updated! This was still a good read, definitely looking forward to more. And if there's going to be a little bit of Horohoro x Anna, then I'm bery excited (it'll be a refreshing change from the usual pairing and who doesn't like love triangles?)

The only thing is Tamao seems a little off. I know you mentioned that she was shy, but the way she introduced people (especially Manta) seemed quite opposite. But this is an AU, so it doesn't particularly bother me.
VampireApple
2006-01-06 . chapter 3
Haha, that's funny. Anna might have to be nice to people. -snickers- Really cool chapie. I feel bad for Yoh though... Poor guy, finally meets a chick and she's all mean to him... Any way, I'll be waiting for the next chapie!
Lizzie;.
2005-08-07 . chapter 2
OMG, prettiful plot! I like it, honestly never read anyone like it before. So cute, the way you end each chapter, making us poor idiots wait for the next chappie in semi-suspense, damnit... Nice, but the chappies could be longer. Love it, I'll be checking back soon~!
Hugs, Lizzie;.
lil_angelchick
2005-07-31 . chapter 2
oh my god! awesome story it's realy really good! plz update soon i can't believe u ended it like dat! anywayz ciao till next time
VampireApple
2005-07-27 . chapter 2
That last line, So much for that, is priece less. I loved it. I'll be waiting for the next chapie.
jade destiny
2005-07-26 . chapter 2
Pretty interesting. I hope this is Yoh and Anna. Well, this is interesting and I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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