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Reviews For: Hikari Yami

lauren
2005-07-31
ch 6, anon.
abusetisk tisk tisk... i'm reveiwing for the fourth time. wow i need a life. i still love the story. please continue!
gc rocker gal 13
2005-07-28
ch 6,
abuseOMG. this story is so awesome. poor Spinner... poor Kendra... i can't believe i'm saying this but poor Jay and um... kendra's friend. please continue the story i'm dying to know what happens.
lauren
2005-07-26
ch 1, anon.
abusethis story's getting weird... o well i still like it.(this IS the 3'rd time i reveiwed) good job... keep up the good work
laurem
2005-07-24
ch 4, anon.
abuseOM.G are they gonna kidnap spinner or like steal his soul or something? please continue i wanna find out what happens to him.
lauren
2005-07-22
ch 3, anon.
abusehey great story. i liked the part where you showed how sorry spinner probly really is. not many(if any) people see that. please continue with the story.
crashetburn
2005-07-21
ch 2,
abuseOoh! A Donnie Darko homage! Maybe not realistic, but Toby needs a storyline anyway.
xcrazibabii69x
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abusethis is acutally really cool. i didn't think i'd like it, but i really do. one thing, tho. you referred to spinner as kendra's stepbrother. she's ADOPTED, and that doesn't mean her family is her "step-family". i'm not trying to sound rude, but i'm adopted, and i hate when people get that ** confused.
MirrorKisses
2005-07-18
ch 1,
abuseAh there's not alot of fantasy stories out here, and this ha[pens to be a unique one at that, perfect job so far, it whusks me off into wonders unimaginable
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