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| lauren 2005-07-31 ch 6, anon. | abusetisk tisk tisk... i'm reveiwing for the fourth time. wow i need a life. i still love the story. please continue! |
| gc rocker gal 13 2005-07-28 ch 6, | abuseOMG. this story is so awesome. poor Spinner... poor Kendra... i can't believe i'm saying this but poor Jay and um... kendra's friend. please continue the story i'm dying to know what happens. |
| lauren 2005-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story's getting weird... o well i still like it.(this IS the 3'rd time i reveiwed) good job... keep up the good work |
| laurem 2005-07-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseOM.G are they gonna kidnap spinner or like steal his soul or something? please continue i wanna find out what happens to him. |
| lauren 2005-07-22 ch 3, anon. | abusehey great story. i liked the part where you showed how sorry spinner probly really is. not many(if any) people see that. please continue with the story. |
| crashetburn 2005-07-21 ch 2, | abuseOoh! A Donnie Darko homage! Maybe not realistic, but Toby needs a storyline anyway. |
| xcrazibabii69x 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abusethis is acutally really cool. i didn't think i'd like it, but i really do. one thing, tho. you referred to spinner as kendra's stepbrother. she's ADOPTED, and that doesn't mean her family is her "step-family". i'm not trying to sound rude, but i'm adopted, and i hate when people get that ** confused. |
| MirrorKisses 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAh there's not alot of fantasy stories out here, and this ha[pens to be a unique one at that, perfect job so far, it whusks me off into wonders unimaginable |