So..what ever happened to this story...i noticed it hadn't been updated since 05...its really good, and you should continue!!

Wow, neat story! This is really interesting, I love mysteries, and this one seems particularly interesting. You write Moody's character ery well, and your general writing style is very nice.
Please, plese continue this story soon and don't abandon it!
-Skite-

Well! i finally i have time to read your fanfictions... amm i love ur history and i hope you can follow it
well i have to go!
tks for all
your chilean friend (i suppose i am ur friend haha)
Pola

Oh dear, you're starting the red herrings already I believe. Was the fact that the deaths are mixed muggle and pureblood just to confuse the real intent or muddy the waters? The prologue mentioned pureblood. The Black House Guild concept is fascinating and it seemed like a good way to bridge the modern and the past. Gives the killer a possible "noble" motive though noble only in his delusions. Liked that AD and MM really didn't know each other besides knowing about reputations and such.

Chapter is fine. MM has to feel her way around the case and that's what this chap shows. Again character dev is really good. Chinese+Moody+stomach never would have thought of it.

HP meets Prime Suspect. I approve. Loved the way you got char details in the dialog. Introducing non-HP chars is always challenging. I think you pulled it off in the little details.

I think the prologue set up the premise well. The cool detached narrative made the action more psychologically frightening and it made the gore more horrific. Have added this to my home page's list of fics. There so few good mysteries.

I'm hooked! Continue please!

Hello Bexy! Keep it going, this fic is fab! (it's chapter 4 already, not chapter 3, but as long as that it the biggest mistake, who cares?) I've never watched CSI but it must be like your fic. WOW. Okay, I'll be out of town for the weekend and should be busy packing by now, but wanted to let ya know that I love this fic and am waiting for the next update! I just love the way you write Alastor+Minerva+Albus in this fic. Love, foci

Dude, you shouldn't even have to ask about whether or not a chapter was good, it's always good no matter what! You're so talented, and I have to admit that sometimes it kinda frustrates me to read your stories when I'm sruggling with writing that doesn't even reach the same class as yours. Yet again, GREAT CHAPTER!! I love this story so much, and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Until next time,
'Tis a gift to be simple, 'tis a gift to be free. Da doo da da dee da dum!

"Ohh" ::shivers::

Hello there! I absolutely admire this story, of course it worked and I'm so glad you updated. Finally Albus appears too, yay! Please continue this story, it's so different from most ADMM stories, it's very cool to read.

OH! Man! That is a good chapter! I can't wait to find out who's behind this, but I have some questions that you might be able to answer without giving away the ending! For instance, there's still magic and wands and stuff in this story? I noticed that Alastor Flooed into Albus' office, but nobody really seems to be casting any spells. Such as when they were looking over the corpse by the river, how come nobody performed an Autopsy Spell or something? It's cool that they're Muggle sleuthing, but it's still rather befuddling to see them at it when they have wands and magic. Like everybody else, I think it's awesome that Minerva is so in charge, it really fits her!
Yet again, awesome chapter. Bigkihap is a good beta, don't get me wrong, but I don't really think that you need that much help. I only noticed a few mistakes here and there, but apparently it's always good to have a beta...
Toreador en garde, toreador, toreador!
I watch Carmen too much.

And so the investigation begins!

Interesting...wonder what other clues will be found and how Albus and Minerva get on :)

Looking forward to reading more.

oh i love this story yey for posting it you should write more. whist were on holiday perhaps, then i get to read before everyone else mwuhahahahaha(cough)sorry.

laterz
luv
amanda