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| Asugar 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Great job. Love John as a dad. |
| JUST LOVE IT 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abusesweet. |
| KateCayce 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! You have really captured the characters in this series of vigniettes! Good job! |
| CharmedAli 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abusegood story it is sweet |
| Kipling Nori 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very good Future-fic. Something that sounds perfect along the lines of John and Teyla. I think you did a very good job. :) I hope to see more of this soon. |
| Lennexa 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI love it! So sweet! But how will they get back in without their clothes? ;-) Well written. I'm glad you explored their relationship as well as Rodney and Elizabeths! |
| Donna Lynn 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThat's how I've always imagine John and Teyla in the future. |
| Dean's Celtic Pixie 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseGreatness yet again...ya know..yu could really make some great stories if you expanded these...like talked more about how the parents got together and then how their children's relationships grow. Either way...great stories. |
| carsonfreelancer 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this fic! I really hope that you add more chapters to this soon. Had a hard time picturing Teyla and John aged, but other then that it was perfect. |