Would I be correct in saying that you won't update your story?

POKE FLUFFI ^^
lol still havent read ur story yet coz dont get it coz dont like tomara peirce but sounds good so far ^^
so um keep writing. poke. how old is this story, btw?

Hewo Fluffy dear,

^^ hehe, don't kill me. Anyways, I'm really sorry I haven't reviewed earlier :( but I haven't had the time. YOu know it's been really stressful and well,yeah- hopefully we'll both update a bit faster next time ^^ but I would say this:

(honestly,) I believe that this chapter was great b'coz the way you kinda stick to the original Alanna series and change them to make it interesting is really good.

-end of honest truth which you won't believe-

Luv,
Maggie

but you need to work out a way around the fact that when they do eventually swap places, jon and the rest will notice that "alan"s personality has changed
i think anyway
and how will you, if you do, have ralon bested?
and will they swap when they go to the funeral of their father?
that would be an acceptable time, also probably the only time if you stay true to the basic plot in the book, myles needs to become alannas adoptive father, and will george find out about the "swap"
i think he will have too, i mean, he is thoms only real friend, isnt he?
he will most certainly notice the difference in "alan"
i should inform you now that i am sry for giving you all these problems, you probably already kow and have solutions for them,
but better safe than sorry,
so now time to tell you why i am bothering to point this out,
i really like the story,
its ingenious
origionall,
and believable,
to an extent anyway
and does thom have an adversion to the cold like allana?
because that will make the swap that much more harder, fun, and interesting
so if you want an idea or any help trying to fit all this in, contacy me at

and i will do my best
this story is to good to let it die,
so please post another chap soon
cheers
evelyn

I really liked it. And I think it's nice that you stayed close to the original story because it's like a sequal to the book.

Greetings to you.
Be punctual next time.. Oh well, better late than never, anyway. My comment? Your chapter is as "CRAP" as Maggie's. Uh huh. You read that.
The reason? You left out a commar, an apostrophe and a word. I know you and Maggie aren't..hm..enthusiastic about receiving compliment so I guess I should stick with: That chapter is "CRAP"! and .. You suck (and that chapter too)! (reserved JUST for you. Go ahead. Feel special)
My suggestions: I believe you should Thom different to Alanna. By this, I mean..their personalities.. Thom shouldn't follow a very similar path to the Alanna in the real books because they are very different characters, obviously. Thom has the Gift so perhaps you might make him use his magic against the bully instead of just letting Ralon beating him to a pulp. If you know what I mean.. Thom acts rashly. His attitude is like: Act now, considerations later. So maybe you should change him a little bit. Otherwise.. he'll end up being in a predictable plot.. Ah.. I've got another idea... Make a female version of George so that he would have someone to fall in love with.. HA HA.
Ignore the above suggestions if you dislike them. I'm not forcing you at gunpoint (or am i...? ) to keep those. They're just being suggested by my alter egos.. Yeah.. Be afraid..be very afraid...

If I'm not making sense.. I'll explain them again.. later..

Question: When will you update again?

cyz in hell.
.mimi.

.update.

You must make the pairing A/G!!
Update fluppi! =P

C'MON! Update fluppi!
I'm going to post mine.. this week.. so u better post that chapter right now!
otherwise.. erm.. i'll... poke you even more!
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please update this. it's got a unique plot and is very interesting. so, i got to ask since the 2nd genre is romance..what are the pairings in this story?

Hey Florence,

I'm really sorry for not being able to give it to you earlier *sad face*!! Blame the tests/assignments, etc. Anyways, I do NOT say that a chapter is good just to make you feel better. I seriously do NOT. I would say whatever I thought it was. Meh..you're really depressing *strangles Florence in Commerce* how can you say that it's bad?! Mine's worse and probably the worse if you say that your fic is bad.

Luv,
~Baby perfectionist~
PS. I finally reviewed (sorry for taking so long)
PPS. I'll beta your fic faster this time (I promise hehe)

heyo florence... (FLUFFY... woops i didn't say that... =])

Anyhoo good good keep it comming! ^^

keep going... its gud... note: i dun noe u...

The Gods and Goddesses are forbidden to tamper with what's going on in the world. Then wouldn't affecting Maude's decisions tampering with the future as well?

Hey fluffo! wow i dnt think u remembered hw 2 update...so newaiz^^...
did u make evrithin up? coz its funny...heh...dnt actualli read da whole thing...but its pretti good so far
so yeh
ok
cya 2moro