When are you going to update this, it's great!

Whoa, waaaayyy too much swearing for my tastes, but it's sure nice to see a Jar Jar fan at work :) Come on, don't leave us in suspense! More, more! _ BTW, I like O3T :) He reminds me of Tahl's robot in the Jedi Apprentice books _

Oh. Please get done!

I so badly want to read the rest! I can't live without more, more, more!

No, I haven't been using nose candy.

Man, I love these stories! I really, really, hope you get it done!

I hope you get this next story done!

I want to find out what happens so badly!

More! I must read more! :-)

A good read. For some reason, it reminds me of movie, "The Mummy". I can see things are going to grow pretty intersting!

CONTINUE please I love this story!

Quality work Draica! And a neat cliffhanger at the end. More! More! :)

Wonderful work! I liked the sad, but frighteningly accurate, tale of the Keyla Gungans. Looking forward to more work of this class.

Wow! This is great! I'll read the second part tomorrow.

Keep it up. Like the tale you thought up.

Wow! This is really good! Keep writing!

Hey I really liked it!

It differs from your regular series. This one may actually be closer to the actual "Star Wars" theme, than is the case with Midnight Voices (you know, more technology, jargon, droids, etc.)

O3T is very irritating droid indeed, but I know you did that on purpose. Poor Jar Jar. Hell, I'd be pretty steamed if some tin-can tried to draw blood from me when I'm asleep.

BTW... What does he look like? Is he an R2 unit like R2D2 or is he an android like C3PO?

Both your serieses are excellent, each in their own unique way. I'm going to E-Mail you soon with some other misc comments on the text. (Irrellevant to post here as a review).

keep it coming so far i really like it.