You did make me cry.. YOu did a very good job. I think you should write alot more stories..

Aww... sadness. Actually, not so much. One thing I really like about your death fics (for lack of a better phrase) is that they always end on a note of hope for the future. And that's a very nice thing.

Oh, you're just too good at this. Bittersweet, sad, uplifting, tear-jerking...You captured Rahne (ang Jean) so well in such a short moment.

...Yeah, you're way too good at this!

Short butsweet, and you managed to compact the feelings of hope and mourning into one oh neat package. I liked how you compared Rahne's losing Moira to Jean's losing Scott. Gave me sniffles Need paragraphs tho.

Really nice short story you've got there, well written and it almost got me crying (sniff, sniff!)