This was such and interesting and original little fic. You do should check your spelling because there was a lot of spelling mistakes but otherwise I really enjoyed it.

Aw, I love Captain Han pairings and I love how you make him a "gentle giant" so to speak, excellent job!

O_O! wat did de captain whipered into yumiko's ear?!?! pls update soon!

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..Huh?!WTF is goin' through your HEAD?!
Still...funk-much to read. Keep goin.
R.*still shudders* O.o

i curious wat did he said? o__O

please update real soon i luv crackpairings.