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Mischievous Wolf of Twilight
2009-08-16 . chapter 14
=O awesome story! x3
plz update =[
green.for.good
2009-01-24 . chapter 14
Yay, this is an awesome story, though I preferred it when it was only Link and Amber... oh well!! Please update, I really wanna know what happens!
SUPRISE
2008-08-19 . chapter 14
nice job please update
GaaralovesMihoko
2008-08-18 . chapter 14
if only amber knew what Kyra thought of her lol
-Nightly Halo-
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
Amber is so ** annoying. I like...skimmed the chapter, cuz i wanted to see what your reviewers say compared to mine, haha. Yeah, that girl that gave you a spikey review was right, and the whole Amber saying her friend's obsessed with dark link? I know who you're talking about

anyways...Read my drabble damnit! >< There's only one chapter...do you even check your reviews? O__o?

-steals cookies that review before gave you- mine! ha! -inhales cookie-
...-munches- ya know...it's odd to imagine Link talking...lawl
no longer online anymore
2008-03-18 . chapter 14
I like this story! its awesome! can't wait for the next one XD
Ray Rune
2008-01-27 . chapter 1
I'll start with the bad stuff. It's a bit harsh, so that's why I want to get it over with. If you feel offended, you have the complete freedom of skipping to the good stuff near the bottom, and I wouldn't blame you at all for it. Okay! Brace yourself.

--BAD--
Oh god. She's so irritating. I'm sorry. She's pretty cute in a relaxed, modern environment, but though you attempted a bit of seriousness with the tektites, she seemed so 2d in personality that she got even more annoying than Navi. My suggestion is to tone it down, perhaps add a more broad range of emotions and thoughts than simply "Ooh cool! I knew you were real! I know all about you! I love you! I know a lot! Ooh cool, I get to go on an adventure! Cool! Oh my god!" and surprise. Link's immediate acceptance could've been funny, but the lack of suspense and general dismissal of any proper explanation of reasoning on Link's part made the amusement go flat. Yeah... I know this seems like cruel honesty, but I sincerely felt like I was watching Link invite his creepy fangirl stalker to go on an adventure with him. ... Actually, in retrospect, that sounds pretty funny. I believe you could've successfully passed it off like that, but you didn't go into detail on what Link's opinions were about Amber. Think about what Link would be thinking exactly if a girl suddenly appeared out of no where, while apparently knowing everything about his personal life and Hyrule's cruel fate laden by Ganon.

--GOOD--
I'm running out of time, so I'll squish them all into a neat list.
-All negativity aside, Link's reaction to Amber's allegations on his opinion about Zelda was a funny moment,
-Amber's interaction with her friends was another amusing moment,
-your spelling was good (not great, but not bad either),
-you started us off with a decent length,
-and had an ending to the chapter that I actually genuinely can call you ingenious for:

[As they climbed onto Epona’s back, with the girl wrapping her arms around his waist, Link realized that he didn’t know her name.]

:D That as a good ending. Thank you.

And thank you for the chapter, as well as reading my review... however spiky it turned out to be.
tatewaki2000
2008-01-26 . chapter 14
Cool fic.
please update soon.
Emeral Wolf
2008-01-26 . chapter 2
This is so cool AND its funny..usually I find stuff thats only cool or funny.GO PIGGY BACK!!AND go Amber(my names amber to..lol)
Good job this is great!:D
Nichelle M
2008-01-26 . chapter 14
I love this story..and that caleb mcjerkface guy sounds like a real ace hole. * gets out a paper fan and proccieds to beat him with it*
Bloody Emma
2007-12-30 . chapter 13
I;m gonna take a guess and say the stalker is shadow Link. OMFG Jenny is in love with him I just remembered! that would be hilareious (sp)if he popped out of no where around her lol
Mennis-chan
2007-07-19 . chapter 13
OMG A STALKER!! I HATE STALKERS! plz update!
BamberPirati
2007-07-02 . chapter 13
says you havent updated this story for awhile...i like it a lot,please update soon,i wanna find out who this stalker is!
BamberPirati
2007-07-02 . chapter 2
Hehe,my name is Amber (hence my pen name...well,nickname) but i like your story,i was laughing the entire time
Celedeen Takarona
2007-02-25 . chapter 13
Sorry I didn't review til now.

(I'll give a cookie to whoever can guess who 'Stalker' is.)

I say it's Zelda.
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