Hi

WOW! A sad but great story.

no, sydney cant die, he needs to live..

Interesting

It was good, but sad. I think Jarod should have gone to him.

My grace. I think I'm gonna cry...

Great story. Sad, but great. Could have been a bit longer.

Awww! I can't believe it ended there! I was sure Jarod would decide to go visit Sydney one last time. How sad! Nicely written, though. Danielle :-)

Nicely done, poignant, and very sad. One question though, after all they've been through would Jarod have walked away or would he have found a way to sneak back into the center to see Sydney?

That was so sad, so well written. It's an interesting idea, haven't read one like it before. Good job!

Very touching, pity as well.

What are you doin'? Sydney can't die, its not fair. I could see it in my head it was written so good, but he cannot die. NO no no no no.

That was fantastic. *sniff* You're a wonderful author.