You are officially my hero of the universe. For the indeterminate future. I am torn between screaming PERFECTION at the top of my lungs while throwing picnics in your honor (at the same time naturally), and curling up in a dark cave to sob for a week over the fact that this is a oneshot. I kind of want to see an epic, two-hundred thousand word war waged by a guilt-ridden Wonka who is bent on redemption by defeating the witches once and for all. Oh my god. Excuse me while I go watch this play out in my brain-theater. *toddles off to do so*

OH! And marvelous job. ^o^

Oh please, oh please, oh PLEASE add more chapters! I truly beleive this story has great potential. And they are both great books so, what the hell, throw them to gether and...PRESTO! An amazong story! YAY CROSSOVERS! anyway,please continue this story, I loved this chapter, and I'm sure any and all chapters written by you will be as good, if not better!

~Em

Wonderful. Two of the best Dahl books in one, and completely believable!

I liked this crossover! Bravo!

It was quite obvious she was a witch. The hat and gloves and high-heels and eyes gave it all away. Even before the alarm clock hint. And why would Wonka help witches? Great story anyway.

Ah, yes, I did recognize the crossover, long as it's been . . . and enjoyed it very much.

OMGOD! MOFO WITCH WANNA STEAL YO SOUL!

I screamed and jumped all over the room when I got to the end...though I must say the accent was a dead give-away.
Brilliant! I loved how you worked in Formula 86 Delayed Action Mouse-Maker (and by the bye, wasn't that an absolutely delicious name?) And wasn't The Witches an absolutely delicious book? Disturbing, as all the best Roald Dahls are, but delicious.

You are great. Just, great. I lureve crossovers! And two Dahl books in one? How could it get any better than that? I have to admit, it took me way too long to figure out who the visitor was, but its been a long time since I read The Witches. Creepy, creepy book. Thank you so much for this lovely oneshot. I really appreciate it!

PS: Poor Willy!

I got it when she starting sniffing out Charlie, but it's been a while since I've read Witches, or I prob would have picked it up at the wig. Well done, I like the Dahl crossover idea.

Alana: *giggles* O read both of these books like how you over cross them! I hope somehow wonka mite find out that she died and that maybe help the boy who was turn into a mouse to turn back into a normal boy agin?

Evo: that would be good!

I think I may have to kiss you for writing this. :-P I love, love, love 'The Witches'; it's been one of my favorite books (though I have quite a few favorites) since third or fourth grade. And then, combined with Wonka... *sigh* It's the perfect fic! And you write very well, too, by the way; your style is detailed while still being light and readable, and your characterizations are perfect. I hope to see more works from you in the future. :)

Whoa. Wonka is responsible for Delayed Mouse-Action Formula 86?

Finally, a fanfiction thats GOOD (with a cross over I like) and doesnt have some 'pretty girl that falls in love with Willy Wonka'. For dear lords, he's at least 20-30 --;.

This is very nice. ^_^ Was that the 'Grand Witch?'

twas interesting. nice to see a bit of anger emitting from Wonka for once.