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61wisampa
2009-09-29 . chapter 5
aw... that was really, really cute! man, can love change a girl... i didn't know rika could act like that! great anywayz...
shiroUsagi
2008-05-13 . chapter 5
First.. Very great job!^^
I was so touched when I've read the story.
But there were some things,I think there were a little bit excressive:
-I thought Rika is a kind of serious person. Because my reminder of Rika is that she was always so ... unhappy and reclusively in "her own serious world" xD So that's because I was wondered about how you write Rikas personallity.
-Rika dance ballet with fireflies? That reminds me of a Barbie story.^^ (But nothing against Barbie story's... I love them xD)
-Henry took out a black box. He opened it and in there was a diamon ring. Then he ask :" Rika, do you want to be my girlfriend?" xD
I've laught so much! But it was a really nice and romantic idea.

So all in all it was a very nice love story and... Keep at it!
Muse-at-dawn
2007-12-09 . chapter 7
ow this was the most beautiful Henrika fic I've ever read! I totally LOVE that couple *stares dreamily at the monitor*

congratz for this
sky7228
2007-08-26 . chapter 5
that was incredible. period. you are an amazing author i love this story.
Shizuku Tsukishima749
2007-06-26 . chapter 7
GET WELL SOON, MISSY! Sorry that you're sick! This fic was awesome! I love how Henry didn't get right to the point of 'I love you' and made Rika freak out a bit! That was...somewhat cool! Great job, and keep writing!

P.S.--Eat lots of chicken noodle soup! :D ;D :) ;)
In Darkness Is Light
2006-12-31 . chapter 6
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
IT IS TEH CUTEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!
DID I MENTION I LOVE YOUR STORY?!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE!
THIS IS THE CUTEST ROMANCE STORY I HAVE READ!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Merble
2006-11-25 . chapter 5
So Kawaii, this is an amazing fic. Can't wait to read your others. Keep writing Mistress of Serenity.
BloomToPerish
2006-02-11 . chapter 7
AW! I love this story! It is SUPER KAWAII! please write soem more Henrika's soon! ^_^
Authentically Yours
2005-10-09 . chapter 4
AWESOME STORY! Well, thanx 4 the reviews for my fic, it's my very first one so I'm happy someone likes them!
you can email me at
Pink Kunai
2005-10-05 . chapter 7
MistressPC get well soon, loyal Henrika fan waiting for ur story. LoL GET WELL SOON
Shinji0189
2005-10-04 . chapter 7
Get Well soon. ^_^
Sweet Cari
2005-10-04 . chapter 5
Lovely fanfic.
SongSwifteye
2005-10-01 . chapter 6
MistressPC,
Actually, I had read this story even before I got the review you wrote on mine. This story was adorable, and I was happy to see that you were much more careful with your writing than many other authors. All in all, a first-class piece of writing! I hope you keep going!
-SongSwifteye
BornfromDarkness
2005-09-17 . chapter 2
hi mistress ! i can say that u should continue Digital Romance its nice although i prefer to Renamon and Terriermon but having Renomon and Renamon pair up is a good idea ... but maybe u should put in Wolfemon with someone else... Renomon and Renamon are both foxes and Foxes should be together right?
Anime-17
2005-09-03 . chapter 6
yes, please please please write the other story soon!
Love this one by the way...so romantic :)
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