Reviews for New Friend,and Broken Hearts

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avatoa 2008-02-24 ch 13,	abuseOh my God! What happened? When are you going to update this story so I can find out?
ThieveingLegend 2007-06-17 ch 13,	abusePLEASE UPDATE! I BEG OF YOU PLEASE UPDATE! oh dang... whew... I really wanna take that Ace guy and... well... shove 'im in a gutter with a few grandes... He's evil I TELL YOU! lolz I'm freakin out too much. Please update soon! I'll loaly wait til then!
rydensupporter 2007-02-02 ch 13,	abuseomfg This story is getting better each chapter UPDATE SOON!
Heiduska 2006-11-12 ch 13,	abuseEP you actually updated! I thought I was just dreaming ^^ So awesome! gasp I am so scared for Kitty's sake! Please, pretty please and everything, write more soon! Heid
SexySpoonsWillRuleUsAll 2006-11-10 ch 13,	abuseI reviewed last chapter, Sgt. Stingo! So neh! OMFG! ACE IS GONNA RAPE KITTY! WHICH IS BAD CUZ YOU'RE ACE AND MY BEST FRIEND IS CALLED KITTY! ARGH! ...is that reading too much into it? If so, I have lived up to my name as a S.Ai Fangirl! Spoons pose Your only real mistakes are grammar and the occassional lack of pronouns, but meh, those can be ignored if ya want. Anyways, good job, you updated in under a year! I'm proudof you :p saluts Spoons signing out!
SexySpoonsWillRuleUsAll 2006-08-21 ch 12,	abuseABOUT BLOODY TIME! ...granted, it's taken me a long time to review, but I was in Europe with no internet. So there. Maybe you should stop having a life outside of the internet, silly :p AND I DO KNOW WHERE I AM GOING OCCASSIONALLY! ANYWAYS, good chapter. Yeah, I spotted some mistakes but I can't be bothered pointing them out at the moment, as you'd ave to be a total idiot not to realise what you actually meant and they were mostly grammar ones, yadda yadda. ...now Ace (character, not you) is reminding me of a character from Fullmetal Alchemist who explodes people's skulls in the name of God. Good work, I love 'im, just maybe keep the blood liking to a bare minimum. Ja ne, Sarge saluts
Heiduska 2006-08-12 ch 12,	abuseHehe yay I made you update! xD Now all those who are reading this can thank me ^_^ Wow I'm speechless. Awesome chapter, lots of action! You are such a great writer, your talent is lost because you don't write so often. You should make yourself write a bit every week or something like that ^_^ Anyways keep this up and update soon! ;D Heid, your best friend ;DD
Jtmscola 2006-05-26 ch 11,	abusei hope you finish this story its looking good.
SexySpoonsWillRuleUsAll 2006-04-20 ch 11,	abuseAce, you're scary. A shiver was going down my spine when you licked the knife. Yes, YOU! points accusingly besides, it took you so long to update, um... I have no clue where I'm going with this. Just, um, update more!
GERHDFGN 2006-04-18 ch 11,	abusethis is really good keep it up. i love the story and i hope sly will be okay. luv Faina
GERHDFGN 2006-04-17 ch 10,	abusethis si so good, i cant wait to find out what happens, keep it up. i love the storyline and everything luv Faina
Heiduska 2006-04-15 ch 11,	abuseEww freaky and scary and...! Wow you've really been fast with these updates of yours. ^_^ Please don't kill anyone in this! I couldn't take it! Heid
erickdragon101 2006-04-12 ch 10,	abuseWahoo! I finally found a way aound my pop-up blocker! I can review again! But, ah, this isn't looking good in Sly's favor. But he will make the same mistake twice, if I know Sly.
Carmen 2006-04-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like this story, but dude i am begging you! Carm/Sly all the way! PLEASE!! I'm gay
Sly is mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... 2006-04-11 ch 10, anon.	abuseYay! U updated!

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