i love your story nice

Yay! I thought this story was going to go unfinished! Great chapter, please don't take so long to post the next one.

Oh crap!

Run Kamakura Run! lol

Good chapter :)

Col! :D

Nice way to start a G.I Joe fic: Snake eyes vs. Wraith!

it's a grait story sad to see it un-finished.

love it so fare!

So when does Slice get executed?

This is taking an interesting turn. My one problem with this story is the typos, I don't see anything wrong with the plot, in fact, I wish I had that much imagination! This is really good, great writing and a stellar plot. Keep up the good work, and KEEP WRITING!

O! Slice is going toregret messing with SE and SS. I can't wait to see what happens when they get out of the game. There is going to be some Cobra butt woop. Yeah! Go SS!

I'm very glad you updated, and now I just wish I knew what was going through that mind of yours! I find it a bit hard to search for foreshadowing and all the crap they teach you to look for in school. Your stories always take turns for the worse and better. . . Kind of hard to guess which.

Anyway, thanks for your review on my poems!

Do you mean: "dichotomous"? If so, then I yes. Thanks for your continuously support.

Rut roh! I knew Slice was stupid but really? Uh, yeah, think so. This could be really good, considering the guys are remembering stuff, or really bad depending on Slice's hacking skilz...

Firefly is an enigma, truly. His motivations are dicotomous (sp) but I wonder...

Love it. Awesome. More, please? ;)

Yay! Another update! Please let them remember soon, because the suspense is just as tense as it is inside of the story! Hurry and update again!

I see you are completing this and I am thrilled. SE and SS need to shake loose from CC's control, ASAP! BTW, this is A-OK and I am glad you are finishing it.