 ScarletLunaNinja 2009-04-07 . chapter 2Oh crap!
Run Kamakura Run! lol
Good chapter :) |
 ScarletLunaNinja 2009-04-07 . chapter 1Col! :D
Nice way to start a G.I Joe fic: Snake eyes vs. Wraith! |
 RSWDW 2009-01-13 . chapter 14 it's a grait story sad to see it un-finished. |
 R.S.W.D.W 2008-12-10 . chapter 14love it so fare! |
 PERSON 2007-03-08 . chapter 14 So when does Slice get executed?
This is taking an interesting turn. My one problem with this story is the typos, I don't see anything wrong with the plot, in fact, I wish I had that much imagination!! This is really good, great writing and a stellar plot. Keep up the good work, and KEEP WRITING! |
 Stormshadow13 2006-08-29 . chapter 14O! Slice is going toregret messing with SE and SS. I can't wait to see what happens when they get out of the game. There is going to be some Cobra butt woop. Yeah! Go SS! |
 Angel Commando 2006-08-17 . chapter 14I'm very glad you updated, and now I just wish I knew what was going through that mind of yours! I find it a bit hard to search for foreshadowing and all the crap they teach you to look for in school. Your stories always take turns for the worse and better. . . Kind of hard to guess which.
Anyway, thanks for your review on my poems! |
 Tower of Babel 2006-08-15 . chapter 13Do you mean: "dichotomous"? If so, then I yes. Thanks for your continuously support. |
 trecebo 2006-08-15 . chapter 14Rut roh! I knew Slice was stupid but really? Uh, yeah, think so. This could be really good, considering the guys are remembering stuff, or really bad depending on Slice's hacking skilz... |
 trecebo 2006-08-15 . chapter 13Firefly is an enigma, truly. His motivations are dicotomous (sp) but I wonder... |
 Carla 2006-08-15 . chapter 1Love it. Awesome. More, please? ;) |
 Angel Commando 2006-08-02 . chapter 12Yay! Another update! Please let them remember soon, because the suspense is just as tense as it is inside of the story! Hurry and update again! |
 trecebo 2006-07-31 . chapter 12I see you are completing this and I am thrilled. SE and SS need to shake loose from CC's control, ASAP! BTW, this is A-OK and I am glad you are finishing it. |
 Stormshadow13 2006-07-31 . chapter 12I hope that SS and SE get out of the VR world in one peace. I can't wait to see how they pay Snakeface and Firefly back. Keep up the good work. |
 Stormshadow13 2006-07-21 . chapter 11This was a very good chapter, lots of action. I can't wait to see how this plan backfires on Cobra Commander. |