I had to favorite this, if not for any other reason, than at least because I read it on a THURSDAY.

You made me laugh so damn much, and it wasn't even because of actual character! A BOOK! If a fanfiction author can make an audience slap their knees without even using something from the original source, the reason everyone is here reading it, that shows talent!

RIP ~dictionary & puppets~

well, you know what? i'm still in the middle of the story and i'm absolutely itching to make a review! OMG! I can't hold my bubbles! What's with the bursting with *Suddenly, something erupted inside his stomach. Or maybe beside it. A little to the left. Up, up, up. Yep, that’s the spot. * you're talking about the organ that pumps blood to our whole system right? ahaha! that's freaking hillarious... wait i'm still going to finish the rest of the story okay, so wait for more words...

what the heck! i can't finish the whole damn thing without reading something funny! What's with Robin and concealing her mystique aura? haha and the puppet thing is funny. You're a humor genius man! I totally love your humor!

lol, trying to explain it with sock puppets, great idea ^^

OMG absolutely Two Thumbs Up ! Really love the 'imsogonnabethepirateking' and the puppet part !! XDD Hilarious, amazing LuffyNami fic ... Also decent in the characterization.
Please keep on writing ! :D

lol.. 'imsogonnabepirateking'.. Well.. That was definitely..unexpected.. xD Luffy's relatives fall asleep in the most peculiar of ways.. (i.e. Ace, while eating and having a conversation; Grandpa Garp, while scolding Luffy, who also fell asleep) That was nice work..! Keep it up! Shishishii! ;D

Really funny, and very cute and very in character. Great fic overall, I think. Made me wanna squeal. XD

That was funny! Loved it! ^_^

I've never heard of the word, "Explanationary" and I surely am disturbed that author did it with Sea Monkeys...or maybe I got the wrong message. I have no idea how Luffy could go from Shanks to Zoro to Sanji then to Nami but I hope he is not gay. That'd be scary because reading that part gave me the frights. Anyways, I can't think of Luffy being gay, nah, he doesn't look like he even notices the difference between a rock and a 'hard place'. Eh, scratch that, I think my brain's on vacation? Nice fic, really enjoyed it.

I think this is my second time reading this fic, but I forgot to review the first time for some reason... ^o^ Welp, I totally love this fic. ALL of your LuNa stories are too awesome, my review wouldn't do it justice at all. m(-_-)m

Even though he didn't appear in the story, I like William Kidd. lol, I couldn't stop giggling with the thing about Sea Monkeys. Love the sock puppet idea and how Luffy wanted to say that he likes her first and was a bit miffed when she beat him to it. It was so Luffy-ish, plus lauging his ** of when Nami was about to kiss him. Priceless.

Rejoice!

poor nami! she had to fall in love with a guy who cant kiss! Good story by the way!

I love this... I love the part Nami threw the puppets and you mentioned like, 'following its predescessor, Robin's dictionary"

That was righteous! Luffy is so incredibly dumb and nami's all for sitting there puckering up forever.I love chopper.He's such a sweetheart. Haha!

Cheers!
RW

super funny and cute! adorable! ha ha ha

o_O That was so strange but somewhat engrossing. Intriguing little ficlet.

~ Uozumi

Ur story sucked donkey d*