Agree whole-heartedly with the title. Grissom *can* be an idiot. Lol. At least Sara isn't afraid to speak her mind.

Great job.

I havent seen that episode but I did like your take on it :-D
Jess x

If only that was the actual ending . . . oh well, this fic was very well written! Great job at putting the first and last lines in!
-Hannah

Wow! That's a very good story. You've captured the characters beautifully. I love the references you made to both episodes. Very nice. :)

~Aphrodite (aka Athena from CSIFiles)

nicley written...and believable.

thanks

this is exactly as it should have gone:)

Wow, this is the best reponse to the challenge I've read! Love how you've written Sara - I like her angry better than angsty most times.

Cool.

Awh...
Ok I wanted to hit and then hug Grissom..lol
It was really really nice fic...forensicsgirl.
You should write more of such short fics...
We don't have to bear the pain of waiting for another chapter..hehe.
Well..that's how I wanted Sara to be...full kickass.
Once again..well done..
As usual...you ROCK !

Aww, that was awesome! I wish that they would actually make that exact episode!! If you couldn't tell, I am a very BIG Gun shot resadue fan! ( GSR)
Keep up the outstanding work! You should continue this, it is excellent!
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:) Sidle Chick

Hey that was me! I *knew* that one quote sequence looked familiar. I was about to scream 'PLAGIARISM' when it occured to me to read the author's notes. Duh! Anyway, I'm liking your fics a lot. This was no exception. I just love a happy ending.

Great job. Awesome story. I hope you do more challenges in the future. (>-)

I loved this! Thank you for sharing this beautiful experience. They were so in character! I could just see this actually happening. One question though...why do writers refer to the guys as children like Brass did at the beginning? Was this ever done on the show?

If only that was how the episode ended! Great use of the lines!

Bravo! I loved everything about this, especially the fact that the challenge lines were completely incidental to the plot. You integrated them seamlessly. Great job.