god i feel like an idiot

i saw shinigami in the summary and it took me a minute to realize that it wasnt a bleach fic.

OMG! That was the BEST CHAPTER YET! (might have something to do with the fact that im in it) that kinda what we did with Sian during FH wasn't it? the whole, " TELL ME!" and cornering her. ALSO THE PART WITH BURKS AND BENJI IS SOO FUNNY! my eyes are watering from laughing soo hard. mom giving me funny looks... OH WELL! and the turning the cloths pink compleatly cracked me up!

u should be proud of me. i READ URE STORY! finally...

and can i have the cookie! u PROMISED! well... not quite, but... uh.. i forgot. my finger itches...

biebie

at the beginning didnt you say this was your first fic? wow, i'm impressed! i dont have much thats actually useful to say, i just thought you should know i like your story, and please continue working on it... thats all, heehee

I thought that it had some room for improvement, but overal lit was pretty good. If I were you, I would look up ebokku's fan fics.

Great work! I laughed at the scene with Trowa, Keahi, and Burks. That was great. I also liked the little scene with Wufei. you write the characters very well.

I had a lot of fun on my trip, it was hot and sunny the whole time, while it was raining up here at home during that same time. I would have gotten this yesterday, but I'm in the process of going through all 70 something stories on my story alerts list because I turned it off just before I left so that my inbox wouldn't fill up.

I can't wait until the next update. Keep up the good work.

Kitten-KC

In my opinion, Trowa and Keahi are perfect! (Although I'm more of a 'Shounen-Ai girl,' myself.) Sorry I have to cut this short, but I fear that Bobb is trying to eat one of my drawings (again)... Cant wait for the next chapter! D

I love Don't Mess With Fire. Once or twice I had to completely close out the window I was laughing so hard.

BTW, you still have that snickerdoodle recipie? My uncle had it once, but I fear it has gone to the recipie graveyard thanks to a certain kitty who likes to eat paper. ( That kitties name is Bobb and he also shredded my pecan pie recipie. (

Erm... off topic-ness.. Anyways! Cant wait for the next chapter!

P.S.- I loved the titles; they made me laugh the most. P

Aw... _

wow, amazing chapter, I love the scenes at the end with Trowa & Keahi and Duo & Kaida, they were so cute. I can't wait for the next update. I also love the scene with... oh whatever, I loved the whole chapter. Keep up the awesome work.

I don't know if I'll get the next update before I leave, but I'm going to mexico on the 7th for a week, but I've got this story on my story alerts so I'll get the update when I get back if that's the case.

Kitten-KC

PS. glad to hear you got your power back.

Hey this is really cool. Hey are you ever ganna put some duo fluff in here. I am shuvering in anticipation. Please update soon. See Ya!

Just a note: In your A/N at the top, it might be a better diss to sockpup if you, y'know, spelled and/or used all the words correctly. Just saying, because mixing up to and too makes you look all of seven years old and no seven-year-old can do a proper diss. :)

-claps- bravo! It was awesomess! (awe-sah-miss) and my opinion is that that is the best darn luff scene from a cartoon in so short a space. _ It ruled. _

Hey Skye. Nice chapter. Im still NOT in it. Well im kinda, sorta, but does that mean im evil or something? See ya

Buahaha! I love the crativity behind this story, elemental powers and all. I have a friend who in her RPG's her eyes are gold except when she is pissed, then they're purple. Keep it up!