I suggest that you don't worry so much about copying. As long as you aren't willfully plagiarizing others, it's doubtful that you'll end up copying them completely.

Wow, two houses leveled, not just one. I feel sorry for Seto. And those dreams, it was interesting how they ended up as death-traps. Anyway, thanks for finally updating. Please keep the story going!

I'm glad that you've updated. I like these dreams/alternate universes that they're stuck in, they're interesting. But what caused them? By the way, I also liked how Seto freaked out the secretary with his predictions. _ Update soon!

Oh, good, so you haven't died! That's a relief. The return of the Yamis was because Yugi opened the tomb right, but where did Gozaburo come from? Anyway, I'm glad that you've posted a new chapter. : ) Update soon!

Where are you? Have you died or something Amber-Kaiba? Please update soon, because the plot is really starting to thicken!

Okay... You did say that I should totally check out Not Enough (Refer to when I reviewed Too Much and I recieved your reply), and I do have some aspects of this story to criticize (And no, it's not flaming). So if you feel the need to bite my head off, at least don't let it be for that.

Firstly, I see a great deal of OOCness... Why is Kaiba hanging out near Mai? His loyalty lies only with Mokuba with the exception of Ishizu since you have the SetoxIshizu pairing in your story. And Ishizu does not use slang while speaking, and she is a serious character. The same OOCness issue applies for Marik and Serenity.

I also see many spelling/grammar mistakes. Perhaps it would help if you revised your work.

Another thing is when Marik's dark side starts acting up... it was destroyed by Atemu/Yami.

So yeah... I think that would be about it. (It's not flaming, it's constructive criticism irrespective of the possible harshness.)

Whoa, I thought that you were dead for the longest time, you hadn't updated in so long! The story is taking an intriguing turn, with Seto pasing out, Marik going berserk, and Yugi hearing a strange voice in the tomb. Please update soon!

thanks for not stopping. you're really talented

i love this . continue ! c

great story plz update son

That was funy!;p and sad T_T

Ha! This was a funny chapter! I hope you update soon! PLEASE!

Lol ! i found it funny imagining Seto in jail...

Continue

Lol . Funny chapter. It took you a while to update eh?