hey keep writing ur good

I love the story so far. it is the best that i have read so far and it is my favorite story. please continue. it is very interesting.

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It's Great So Far!

hey there! hope you update this one really soon. it's great so far.

very interesting story. can't wait to find out more...hehe, i'm also working on some dbz stories-most are songfics right now. keep up the work!

Um...reading the fic and loving it!

gezzz and here i was thinking it had ended... well you'll just hold me in suspence utill u write more... sigh

Love IT!

That was a story I couldn't stop reading, and I anxiously await the next part. Keep 'em coming!

ohhhh, suspense. When are you going to update it. I am at the edge of my seat here.

Very nice A/U. Good plot and a way cool story line, this is is some good stuff. Please keep writing. One thing, it could use some more angst but is still a really good story.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! oh the suspense! i really love this a/u! its really diff from the others i've read, including my own! wow! yay! get the next chapter out quick

I like this story, keep writing!