great story;)

This is good. Weird, but good. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

great story please update

Gosh this story is so cool! And surprisingly all of thease pairing are my ABSOLUTE FAV! ^^ YOU MY FRIEND ARE DELIGHTFUL!

i like the way its set up

PLEASE uptade!

Cool, everyone's inner feelings are letting loose and I'm hanging off of every word 0 o *stares at computer screen*...*drools* okay, I'm not in a trance anymore. This is really getting somewhere. I like how you're updating the plot AND the relationships at the same time ^_^ not many people know how to do that with writing (me being one of them, but I try *I think I'm getting a bit better but I won't know for certain unless someone goes into great detail about my story telling-ness*). Well, I'm still here and will always be *affical stalker* anyway XD loved the last bit with Ino and Sakura's little fight. You know what they say, the drunk never lie, and when something is true, you can't. Say. Anything (like a certain pink haired kunoichi). Lol, anyway LOVEING THE STORY XD

~GaaLee lover~

Oh action 0 o (I not even CLOSE to making a good action scene) I'm still confined to mind tricks and violent inner struggles as my story element ^_^. I love the way you write, I can picture everything clearly, litterally. Sasuke's demon chakra overwelming Naruto's Kyuubi one and everyone stancing and pairing off into different locations. This is so exciting XD LOL! ONTO NEXT CHAPPIE XD!

Wow, it's cool how elaberant this plan of sasuke's is playing out. I've got to go to bed, I'll finish the rest tommorrow if I can *i promise to comment every one!* *waves bb*

oh juicy scenes with all the couples *except of course for SasuNaru* they actually have me quite worried about Naruto (poor naruto, makes me not wanna have kids, the throwing up, the pain...wow 0 o) Anyway, love all the pairings, all the chemistry! ShikaNeji is so cool and calm but smexy at the same time *especcially the absent touching of the skin scene) lol. L-O-V-E-D the Gaara Lee shots! *drools* Oh, and I love the extras! Hinata is cool I'll admit to that, but even she is prone to danger when she messes with what's not ment for her. *smiles* still stalking this story

wow, the girls seem lucked out eh? Well, that's too bad! Lol, never really cared much about them in the show anyways (they're fun extras to add to a story but...that's about it). I like how you expressed how every guy felt about the other (their excessive glaring, bee stinging and threatening.) Awesome. Anyway, I ENJOYED THE EXTRA lol, still loving it!

Neat-O! I love this already. It's serious but funny at the same time. It's not too much and it's not to little...it's just right. The fact that all my appretiated couples are in here really makes me happy *grows wings* ESPECCIALLY GAAXLEE (Lee is the uke am I right? Finally! lol Everything u've described about them is perfect down to the last cent!) Well, I'll be stalking u and this story *thumbs up*

Ha ha ha! This is great! I can't wait to read more! Great job!

wow! i love this!

I'm a hardcore sasunaru fan, so i wish there were more moments of just them.

nice work

This story is so GOOD... PLEASE update soon... ^_^