To be honest, I'm not much of a Waya/Isumi fan but this story was... I don't know. I can't think of words to describe it. Adorable? Glomp-worthy? 100% perfection?

In any event, It's going in my favs!

This is a beautiful story, it reflects the forbidden love component of yaoi that facinated me from the first time I encountered the genere... especially this sentence"...but love is still beautiful, agonizing, glorious, world-shaking love. And even if they think he shouldn’t be..." v its so..so beautiful...so idealistic...so full of hope and happiness, me love it!

hi! you wrote waya/sumi quite good (and cute) and further more, a lot!

thank you thank you i just like this pairing very much!

you already become my one of fave authors.

Just an idea, what about "Out of Focus", y'know, for both the fuzzy mall snapshots and the fact that his parents don't understand... dunno. Good fic though! _

so beautiful! i would say continue but i like it the way it is, you too, yes? but i would say continue to write more fics for i will definitely read them! generation gap sounds awkward at first...but now to think about it, it's mainly about his parents not agreeing to what he was doing right? so...gerenation gap..i don't know, just fits! or maybe a snapshot of love, i'm so sappy! oh well, great job! 0