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| Mad Elf 2007-08-05 ch 5, | abuse"Who ever said that horror stories had to have happy endings?" No-one. On the other hand, no-one ever said they should have endings with all the class and narrative logic of "and they woke up, and it was all a dream". Why'd you have to go and ruin all that good work with such a dumb, ill-thought-out, throwaway ending? |
| MattCauthon1 2006-06-02 ch 5, | abuseIs this the actual end? If it is, it leaves alot to be desired. If it aint, when will the next chapter be out? |
| Michael The-Zorch Haney 2005-11-28 ch 5, | abuseThis was pretty good. A sort of Ranma crossover with the movie Ghost. The ending was evil. I wonder what sort of horrible agonies Ranma/Death put Ranko through just before the blade had a chance to penetrate. |
| obsidian-fox 2005-09-06 ch 2, | abuseIt seems unlikely that two ghosts could feasibly enjoy sexual release (or, likely, even other forms of bodily passion). That would require their ghostly forms be... sexually functional. However, for now I'll suspend disbelief and read a little more. |
| Kamui Nephlite 2005-08-17 ch 5, | abuseHey its a good story...a little warped but i liked it |
| ss4-link 2005-07-30 ch 5, | abuseThat was a wonderful story and your right about horror stories don't need a happy ending. Good chapter nice heavy and unexpected ending. You could continue it if you want I wouldn't mind giving more praise about it. It's up to you so until your next chapter or story keep up the good work |
| ss4-link 2005-07-30 ch 4, | abuseThe lost boy is no more great idea. Keep up the good work. |
| phoenix.ru 2005-07-28 ch 5, | abuseOk, a classical Hollywood horror ending... BUT I HATE THOSE! This is Fanfiction! Why not change the rules for once!?!?! Still, that was fun to read... is there an epiloge - continuation?? |
| Ranko 2005-07-28 ch 5, anon. | abuse@_@ What a 'killer' endin'. =D *MWAHAHAHAHAHA* Wonderful stuff. Keep up the entertainment. =) |
| Wonderbee31 2005-07-28 ch 5, | abuseThat was a heck of an ending, nice twist there. Really looked forward to this part, and hoping that you might sometime make a sequel to this one. |
| Silverscale 2005-07-28 ch 5, | abuseExcellent chapter, kee pit up. |
| ... 2005-07-28 ch 5, anon. | abuseWait a minute! Ryoga DOESN'T use weighted clothing! I've watched the entire anime series and read most of the manga as well and he didn't wear weighted clothing. The only thing he had weighted down is his umbrella! |
| phoenix.ru 2005-07-28 ch 4, | abuseHm...There was this story... "Riding on a Pale Mustang" by Gryphon Aerie1 that had similar idea of Ranma accepting the mantel of Death... however that was a comedy (and a good one). Here we have a horror story worthy with lots of tension and a bit too much blood and murder (at least to my liking ^_~). (so I can safely assume that, for a horror, this is a good story as well ^_^) RxK part surely adds to enjoyment factor (a lot). ... Really don't know what to say aboy sadistic Ranko though.. (ok, personally I don't like this idea, but that's because I don't like things like that in general) What will happen now?? Kasumi almost killed Ranko, so she'll be able to stop her again (wraiths are really powerful ^_^) ... when (and I think it's a when, not if) Ranma accepts the mantle of Death he'll be able to stop Ranko with much greater ease (I believe he can do this right now already... from that little "sparring" with Death). Unfortunately, the only outcome of the confrontation I can see is the death of "Ranko" (I really can't see the way for her to atone for all those murders...) but what next? Hope to learn this soon! ^_^ |
| glazedlookineyes101 2005-07-27 ch 4, | abuseI can't wait to see what happens next! You really have me captivated with this story and it saddened me when I saw the End Chapter. Please update soon okay! |
| Ranko 2005-07-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseWonderful stuff!! =) THE SUSPENSE IS KILLIN' ME!! X) Can't wait ta see the endin' to this. Keep up the good work. =D |