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| mafiaprincess 2007-09-02 ch 9, anon. | abuseOJEY, SO I KNOW I'M REALLY LATE WITH THE REVIEW...BUT, THAT SERIOUSLY WASN'T NICE...LEAVING IT HANGING LIKE THAT...THOUGH, I LOVED IT...U STUCK IT TO SARAH...I DON'T LIKE HER. MAFIA PRINCESS/ ALISA |
| Dr. Colleen 2006-11-13 ch 1,  | abuseOh Gil! Oh Cath! Oh No! Love what I've read so far... Cheers Dr. Colleen |
| kelly nguyen 2006-07-11 ch 8, anon. | abusethe story is amazing!please atlease put up a few more chapters. |
| Grissom Luver 2006-02-14 ch 9, anon. | abuseKIM YES PLEASE DO I LOVE THIS STORT COUNTINUE PLEASE U ROCK |
| i-love-svu 2005-09-08 ch 8, | abuseThis is an awesome story! I'm not a Grissom/Cath fan but it ROCKED! Great job!! |
| Me Oh My ITs Zoe 2005-09-05 ch 9, | abuseYAY! I would love to read a sequel! I hope its up soon!! |
| mahra 2005-09-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseof corse we want another chap i hope it contain some cath angest more than in these chaps but anyway it was a great story thank u |
| Kylie Anderson 2005-09-03 ch 8, | abuseI think that you don't need to make another chapter or sequel. It's really good the way it is and if you were to make it longer, it would strench the plot as you title was Home Invasion and the home invasion already happened. I personally think it would be too much. I suggest you work on your other fine stories. |
| Sango2 2005-09-02 ch 8, anon. | abuseYes!, please continue. ;) |
| medicalattention 2005-09-02 ch 8, | abuseplease continue maybe something else tragic could happen like say the guys that held cath hostage didn'd die and they escaped or something or one of their family members who want revenge, they could kidnap gil and cath and maybe even lindsay and i donno ... torture gil and cath but dont hurt linds but dont kill any of them off please! catherine x |
| willpower1318 2005-09-02 ch 8, | abusenew chapter, definatley (can't spell) |
| D.M.A.S 2005-09-01 ch 7, | abusedo continue... PLEASE... I so need more of this... |
| medicalattention 2005-08-30 ch 6, | abuselove it carry on please |
| TrishG 2005-08-27 ch 6, | abuseGood story, but you need a beta. You use "women" when you should use "woman" (1 woman, 2 or more women). You use "then" when you should use "than" (more than). You use "will" when it should be "we'll" (we'll have to kill her). This is just a few of the grammatical errors. |
| D.M.A.S 2005-08-26 ch 6, | abuseWOOHEE, WANT MORE |