This is such a great fic. It's just so well written, and utterly perfect, and sweet. Both chapters are really great (though this one was especially hot...). I read this ages ago before and it was the first slash fic I ever really enjoyed. Coming back to it now (after having read a lot of slash) I still love it, it's just so refreshingly innocent, and sweet (and such a great pairing, I wish I could find more of it, though I think that I would be disappointed because I'm sure it wouldn't be as good).

That story is just awesome! Please write more Obi/Garen stories, I just love them :)

oh! *_*

so cute!

I know this is late, but better that than never?

I absolutely adore Obi-Wan and Garen. There's just not enough of them together, slash or otherwise.

"It was perfect"

That was grate, I really enjoyed it. Can I beg for a sequel?

Oh wow I totally didnt expect this! But it was good none the less, but it keeps me wanting more! I've read Qui/Obi, Obi/Ani slash before but never this, nonetheless it was good!

Wow! Thanks to Shan for letting me know about this jewel! Loved both chapters and hope there will be more.

I like your Story. Maybe you could write more Obi/ Garen stories? ;-)

i like your story maybe you could write more obi/garen stories? ;-)

Thank you for bringing this scene to life so wonderfully, Ari. You included everything I requested - and so much more.

I agree - the chemistry between these two is just ripe with possibilities!

Loved the sweet acceptance of their mutual attraction and most especially loved the promise of more between them.

You are still the angst queen - but for your first foray into slash, this was just wonderful! I hope to see more.

-shan

Aww, that was really sweet! I'm quite fond of the Obi-Wan/Garen pairing, especially while they're still padawans, so this was a real treat to read. Thank you! :)

young love is so sweet. :)

I enjoyed reading this. It was well written and the timing and plot were carried along nicely together. Its always nice to see a bit of Obi-Muln. I hope you continue to develop further into this genre, seeing as how you wonderfully potray them,